Reviews for visceral
zairoon chapter 1 . 6/18/2017
Awww I loved that one. I actually never hated Soo-Won to start with, as I was sure he had a good reason to behave the way he did. But I don't like him either. I guess I have strange feelings for this character. Mostly because he ended up hurting Yona and Hak so horribly.

Anyways, this piece was an absolute beauty. Your writing style is so nice to read, you captured all the inert feelings of Soo-Won, and I am glad that you too believe that he should end up with Lili :p

Thanks for this great fanfic !

Zai.
AtetheSun chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
This was amazing! Decided to venture over here from Ao3 to see if there were any good Yona offerings, and now I'm glad I did! This was a super well-written reflection of Soo-won. You really fleshed out his thoughts and motives while keeping it all in-character. Looking forward to reading your other works!
Windswept Blossoms chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
Beautiful! I really like how you portrayed Soo Won in this. It's a nice glimpse into what goes on in his mind. Because he's not evil, just a cinnamon roll doing what he believes is rightAnd I can see him wanting to be with Lili but refusing to because he doesn't want to taint her. I really enjoyed this :D
M-Angel 05 chapter 1 . 6/24/2016
This was beautifully written, but kinda sad.
Basil Allegri chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
Nice Soo-Won introspection. He does wear a lot of masks... it must get to him sometimes.
Mooselk chapter 1 . 6/8/2016
Yes yes yes this is the best kind of soowon. You perfectly captured the confusing painful thing, for lack of a better word, that is at the core of the guy. I also commend you on managing to do so while keeping what happened between Il and Yuhon ambiguous. Your writing is also very fluid and wonderful to read. All around great job!
Ciarei Ceryn chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
I'm so glad someone likes him too!
Great work :)