Great story!

Μy heart is breaking right now. Usually, when I read complete stories, I only review the last chapter. But this time I couldn't help myself. Oh my ... That was so heartbreaking to read. My heart is in a million pieces right now. Poor Reza! And poor Nadir! Christine is indeed an angel and I'm so anxious to read the rest of the story because I can't bare to think what will happen to her.

Congrats on finishing this marvelous story!

I see why you called this your favorite chapter of this story. It is very good indeed. My favorite too. So far, of course...

Wow! This is so lovely! They are so beautiful, and Christine’s secret had me so curious!

Sounds more like bastardized Spanish to me...

Again a lot of great elements to enjoy. Although for the first half it felt like you were writing Meg. All bubbly effervescence, giggles and silliness. Occasionally the dialogue could have been smoothed out a bit too. Perhaps try reading it out loud to see how it sounds? Also a 3 week coma in the 1800's and she lives? Damn. Girl is lucky. But still SO many wonderful parts and interesting to see you grow as a writer with every fic

Oooh THIS was good. This had pain and self hatred and all the classic Phantom themes. Sometimes you need a dark shadow to really appreciate the contrast

Internal gross sobbing is occuring. I just finished this story- It's so wonderful! I commend you on everything you have accomplished in writing this story and all the others, and I aspire to write more like you do: with complex thought, engaging plot, and a wonderful, picture perfect ending. Thank you!

This story is wonderfull! Love IT!

Whew. Okay. Wow. So, I was going to just review every chapter as I read them, but I didn't have wifi about ninety percent of the storyso that didn't happen. Now. Let me get onto the review: THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL AND THERE ARE TEARS, REAL TEARS POURING DOWN MY FACE! UHH I JUST CAN'T I'M FANGIRLING WAY TO HARD RIGHT NOW. Your writing is absolutely STUNNING! And believe me, I rarely exaggerate especially on serious matters like these. I have started reading so many kay-verse phics but put them down because everyone was so out of character and the plot was unrealistic. BUT you have captured the kay-verse BEAUTIFULLY. From the way you've done your characters, their relationships, their feelings, their actions, everythingis just so perfect! Let me just say. Your Erik. Oh. My. God. I. Swear. I. Fell. Even. More. In. Love. Gah. Uh. Hmm. *smileslaughsgigglesswoonsfaints* Uhh I can't even write in complete sentences when I think about him. Bless, I want my own Erik now. (Well, not that k haven't for the last however long, but oh well.) Your Christine was an absolute angel as well. I loved how you made her not want to 'posses' Erik, which is a side we see very, very, rarely from her in the fanfiction world, and you put her in the kay-verse perfectly. You don't know HOW MANY times I have seen her put in as a prostitute, beggar, etc. But putting her in as you didgeez I thought you really were going to kill her. And BLESS my heart melted with all the Christine/Reza I swear I died to many times and cried when the precious little one diedwhy did you do that to my heart?! Anyways, all that nonsense being said, I look forward to reading your other works and the ones you publish in the future! you for helping me get through my week with this story. I swear it wad the only way I got through crap teachers and nasty homework. Lol XD

This is definitely one of the BEST fanfictions I've ever read! You captured Kay's Erik just ugh so well! And I'm eager to read more of your works!

Welp, I just finished this last night, and let me tell you, this is by far one of the best Kayverse phics I've read in a long time. You absolutely captured the characters in Kay's world, and to me bookverse E/C can be difficult to master and portray. But your portrayal was very realistic, and for that I'm grateful. lol It was most definitely a quality read. I could barely keep away from my phone! Beyond the insertion of Christine into this part of the timeline, I loved that Erik and Christine were closer in age. Specifically, you caught Erik at a time in his life when he was obviously traumatized, but still hopeful that maybe something could change, and that's a very important distinction. Because, really, Erik didn't completely lose his friggin' mind until a bit later. To me, in Persia , there was certainly a darkness in him, but at that point he was fighting it. With Christine in his life, that darkness didn't have a leg to stand on. I love that her characterization is mature yet still holds on to some playfulness to get through those horrible days. That is something that I feel that she would have become in Kay's novel had Erik been a little more...conventional with his courtship. XD But what you've done here basically takes those great aspects of these characters, throws in their darker parts, and combines them to make a realistic and touching story. I absolutely adored this and am most definitely going to check out your other works. Keep it up, phriend!

Yay! Happy Ending! Married and happy together. Great story! *applause*

(pouting slightly)
Oh, come on, Ali!
Aren't you going to give them a child?