I love the way you write. This story is so captivating. Thank you for writing this, it is a sure favourite of mine.

Seriously breathtaking,

This is a GREAT and intense first chapter.

Whoa this was good

What an absolutely incredible work of literature - amazing job!

How the hell dis Gai not at least kill Sasuke? Gai almost killed MADARA with his Night Guy thing. What the actual fuck? Oh god. I want to throw up or sit and cry my brains out. Fuck. How is this story not famous? The name of the story should begin with capital letter. Or else it gives the impression that the grammar is bad or the story is.

Doesnt Naruto have Sage Mode? Why doesnt he use that? Kakashi can take Sasuke if Naruto distracts Obito. Then they could have double teamed Obito. Why didnt Kakashi go for Obito's head when the kunai didnt kill him?

Friend-Killer huh? I thought it was Comrade-Killer. Oh well. Same thing. I actually do understand Gaara's way. You know, Kakashi being awesome. And how the hell did Sakura die of no shoulder thing? Cant they just cauterize the wound instead?

This is so good that I'm gonna review as much as possible. I actually cried. Not that thats very hard.

Hamilton fan huh?

You killed Gemma off twice. Once in chapter two, then again in chapter three. This is interesting story. I look forward to the rest.

I'm such a sucker for well-written time travel fix it fics. They can never get old.