Reviews for Learning to Fly
Thrashing-Light chapter 6 . 3/19/2018
YAY! Welcome back! :)

ooooh, it was a little unclear here because the colors don't show up in my browser, but I like the more helpful version of Diana more than her just simply leaving. Maybe it rounds her out more and shows their relationship a bit better? I, for one, had no idea that she felt such a maternal bond towards Robin so this was cool to see play out.

I also like the how the fic continued, but thought the ending was a little abrupt. I would have liked to see how Batman reacted to the ending of both 'truth busting' techniques.

Overall, your writing style is very concise and not flowery which is great, but I would love to get a sense of some more showing details throughout the fic. You have a great sense of it at the beginning, but the details dwindle a bit towards the end. Does anyone's voice change pitch? How does Dick's body/mind feel different? I would love to see a little more meat on the bones of this chapter but it's also refreshing that it isn't bogged down in meaningless strings of adjectives and awkward adverbs.
Pixie07 chapter 6 . 3/15/2018
Loved this chapter
Pixie07 chapter 5 . 7/23/2016
I love this
Thrashing-Light chapter 5 . 7/23/2016
yes! fabulous update per usual. love the fact that you say he is around 11 1/2 years, that cracked me up unintentionally!

I do think i am biased, but my favorite part of the fic may have been the Flash. I love me some flash. Loving the progression! keep it up!

also i got the riddle! great one by the way, thinking up riddles is so hard!

-TL
jam2014 chapter 5 . 7/22/2016
It's always polite to say please. Good luck with the move.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/21/2016
Please? ;)
Thrashing-Light chapter 4 . 7/15/2016
another slammin chapter! Just enough description and interaction to make the trainings personal, and relatable, while still keeping them as trainings. I love how even Bruce was like...these seven hours could have been spent a lot more efficiently, but at the same time realized how Robin being that vulnerable is an obvious problem.

thanks again! :)

-TL
jam2014 chapter 4 . 7/14/2016
Another enjoyable chapter! Lol!
Thrashing-Light chapter 3 . 7/5/2016
Another amazing update! i love how his opinion of his new team mates wrap around his flashback. You have an incredibly clean writing style! I am quite envious and ! cant wait for the next update!
LegitMistress123 chapter 3 . 7/1/2016
Aw! This is a cute, and a very well-developed story. You have obviously thought out at least some of this story, from its complexity. I really love it! This is so cute as well!
jam2014 chapter 3 . 7/1/2016
Just a quick thank you for going on with this. Very well written and enjoyable.
Thrashing-Light chapter 2 . 6/21/2016
Hey! loved the buildup and explanation here! I loved how Alfred kept harping on Dick's grammar only to have the notes to be be written in perfect English. Too. Cute.

Also, loved how Bruce was just like...c'mon Alfred use your thinking cap for this one ;)

keep it up!

-TL
jam2014 chapter 2 . 6/21/2016
Interesting one shot. Keep it up.
Thrashing-Light chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
Nicely done, perfect amount of description and emotion necessary to convey what's going on, but not being flowery or too dramatic. Cant wait to see how the characters grow together and on their own. Awesome job!
Guest of honor chapter 1 . 6/8/2016
I really want to see what happens when Robins training with Batman so please update soon.
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