Two years later and no new chapter. Hiatus or do you not have the creativity to finish the story you started?

Okay, spelling, grammar, and punctuation are all over the place, to the extent that I can't go through each example. But even that aside, it's incredibly rushed. An entire chapter could be spent just on the end of Halo 3, to account for the depicted events and the presence of the Arbiter, but here...yeah. Very rushed.

This is good I can't wait till the next one. :)

Halo 4 was great.

I like the story, just try to work on the spelling (cortana, not cortana, etc.) And overall punctuation.

Please clean up your grammar before continuing; change the genre to Humour instead of Suspense because I was laughing throughout all of this prologue.