Excellent story! Really wish h5 was like this instead, but will you ever make more chapters for it or do you consider it done?

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Then you'll have bigger problems.

Namely...

...the Flood.

You had me at multiple Earths. My head was spinning at the prospect.

Interesting but too rushed and you glossed over details, do the opposite of those and it may be good.

This is how Halo 5 should have been. You made the story more believable and made the characters more loveable in this. good job.

I hate Locke i wish him to die, worse additional to the Halo franchise

I cant wait for a final Master Chief/Didact battle, i hope its just the two of them without interferance, like the rest of Blue Team and if Osiris is there them as well are being held in like that stasis thing from the game only being able to watch not help

This is an AWESOME story i can't wait to read more so please update soon! :)