Reviews for Meet the Oxtons |
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Snappy Flowah chapter 14 . 5/25/2018 I'm here, waiting... ~Snappy~ |
TimothyB chapter 14 . 2/17/2018 I hope you continue this! I love this story and it's getting even better. Since Lena was spying I wonder if she saw the conversation. Keep up the amazing work! |
Codename-ShadowFox chapter 1 . 12/13/2017 That was hard to read, the story flow is all over the place and the dialog was pretty bland in my opinion. I think I'll be giving it a pass. |
pikachucat chapter 14 . 12/6/2017 awesome |
Mike0the0mic chapter 14 . 12/5/2017 Very good story. Nice Codename, hope Naruto and her get together soon. If you ever want to include more of Naruto's lore to the story you could make the Bijuus experimental "God Programs" AI (like Anubis) Talon are developing. Naruto is captured by Talon and used as a host for the AI 009 Designation Kyuby before being rescue by Overwatch. |
Brehze chapter 14 . 11/26/2017 Great chapter |
Manga reader 125 chapter 14 . 11/26/2017 Wait… this isn’t a new chapter? (Grabs a torch) oh wait, there’s an actual chapter underneath (puts the torch down and continues to read) hm… not bad, but codename ‘Ranger’? (That codename sounds like it better suits someone proficient with a bow rather than a sniper rifle, but hey, it’s your story) |
Berlioz Chaos Lord of Khorne chapter 14 . 11/25/2017 Could be better. Could be worst. Nicknames are like that. |
Lazruth chapter 14 . 11/25/2017 Ranger, eh? I mean, it works, but only because it's bare-bones simple. It's like those D&D games I play where the DM denies anybody who names their ranger that name. It's way too cliche and boring. How about something in French, since Amelie is French? "Portée", which is French for "Scope" for example. |
SanguisAnima chapter 14 . 11/25/2017 Ha. The A110 does it again. No one can resist its BRRRRRRT powah! XD Kidding aside though, glad to see an update. At least you're more regular on updates than I am! |
DannyPhantom619 chapter 13 . 10/8/2017 Show me the Prankster King of Konoha. |
Manga reader 125 chapter 13 . 9/30/2017 That was a crappy chapter (pun intended) |
Dark Matter chapter 13 . 9/7/2017 Fuckin hilarious story! |
Guest chapter 13 . 9/7/2017 Dude! Update the shit out of this awesome story! Please! |
Kev chapter 13 . 8/28/2017 I thought maybe there would be a little Naruto and Widowmaker action, I wasnt expecting it at first but you set it up so perfectly and now I really want to see it T_T |