Very originalyou've pulled off the ye olde writing style very well!

This is super! Fantastic story and wonderful originality. Also, I do like the way you have then talk, it makes it feel so medieval

OMG this is freaking amazing! Keep going I love the medieval AU, super original!

This story is awesome! I've been wanting a midevial au for a while. I can't wait to see what you do with the other characters like roy and armstrong. Btw, am I correct in assuming the hourse,en are the homunculi?

I'd wanted to review on the first chapter, but I think I was both in a hurry and a little intimidated by the thought of being the very first reviewer... *sweatdrop* But I'm not now, so I speak! :D

26 Combo's cool! :3 And you're cool! :D YOUR ENTIRE FAMILY IS COOOOL! *likes to be cute like that :P*

I really like this! It's not often one sees a writer fiddle with the boys' ages, for one, which always means Ed is even more protective (unless they made Al older, of course). The language and way this is written is quite enjoyable, too. ("Are you daft?!" XD) And, well, I'm excited to see where this leads the Elrics! Will they escape? Will they learn enough alchemy?! Will they SAVE THE WORLD?!

100 cenz 1 USD? Sounds about the same as the Japanese yen then and just like my suspicions of what cenz are worth. :D

Just a suggestion, but it's a bit hard to find unfamiliar places like Awbeziz on a map. I would have appreciated it if you'd just mentioned that it's south of Dublith and left it at that. I'm really glad that you pointed out that we can see the names of more cities if we look up the map and zoom in though - I may be using the map for reference in future stories myself, but I guess I'll have to see.

Thanks for posting this story. I love fantasy.