lol so far it looks pretty good...there are some words i refuse to use but overall your compositions good...keep up the editing and dont forget to read your story aloud.

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great chapter keep it up

That's it?! I wanted more chapters :(

Still my favorite lemon artist tho

Well, things scalated very quickly with Natsu and Virgo.
She is definelly pregnant or going to be, because of their unprotected activities together.

Can't wait to read more about NatsuxVirgo lifes as lovers.

Nice.

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is this a one shot? I would personally be estatic if this became a multi-chapter story because you don't see this pairing that often. I have to say that the lemon happened pretty quick (no offense). I think that the writing was good but it just left you wanting more chapters which I really hope to see in the future. Great job and have a nice day -

GOOD BUT WEIRD AS FUCK...(PUN INTENDED)

Is this gonna be a long story hope it dose

I love this couple would love to see more of this and of them together.

Is this a One-Shot? Because it had a lot of potential for a multiple chapter story.
That can explore Natsu and Virgo lives as a couple.

The Lemon happen to quick since they barely told each other feelings, but if they wanted it is okay.
Maybe it have more chapters.

Not bad.