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"All across Westeros, from Dorne to Winterfell and from the Iron Islands to Kings Landing, all had seen the grinning moon of the Laughing Prince at least once. Some stories say that he was a demon who fed upon the death and misery of others, while others say that he was a plague from the old gods upon those who forsook them. Sansa didn't take much stock in such rumors but she had to admit, there was something strange about this villainous prince. The way he appeared and vanished, the way he evaded capture and the amount of blood he had shed, it all seemed to be the work of an inhuman fiend, not a man who looked like a mummer" This is a perfect example of how bad your writing is...in the first chapter of this fanfiction you had varys search for the joker and his laughing moon symbol, yet he said to Cersei that he couldn't find anything ,and here in CH3 you write that everyone know of him! You contradict yourself mate.
Look the first chapter was really good and had the potential to be a good or even great story had you written it well.

I recommend you to rewrite this story again and woth much more thought put into it ,and please remove the other characters of batman show as they are unnecessary and add distractions to the reader . just keep the joker that would be alot better.

well this was really good. We got our first taste of joker gas in medieval form, seems the effects are as dangerous as they are in normally. At the same time it seems that the joker's army is growing by the hundreds with the small folk joining in more in more as the war goes on and the peasants get sick of the rich. I fear by the end of the war the joker will have a sizable force to challenge the kingdoms.

the appearance of the batman to me feels a bit off of him stopping the mountain from killing the joker. Like batman fighting the mountain is not bad considering that Gregor is a monster that should be put down, but to stop him from killing the joker, a guy who will keep on creating more chaos, seems to be quite a weird move.

overall good chapter setting the mood and the grim fate of all the people here.

good show.

Just found this story, greatly enjoy it, however I would like more focus upon Freeze and who I assume to be Poison Ivy.

this was so good i cant wait for the next chapter please update as soon as you can please

Oh the Westeros are in for reckoning with this crossover

this is a great read please update as soon as you can please

Here I thought this would be like the Batman Ninja movie.

this was pretty good. seeing some of the side things before we get to the main events. really well done and a new update so soon after the last one, very happy on that.

so far the criminal underbelly is changing with the new kind and a new secret society has been introduced. things will be starting to get crazy indeed.

looking forward to more stuff, kinda curious on what penguin will be doing with the Starks.

Tyrion es uno de mis personajes favoritos.

Me gusta la interacción entre Arya y Billy.
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Tyrion is one of my favorite characters.

I like the interaction between Arya and Billy.

Great chapter! Would like Batman in this fic fight against GOT villains, and of course the DC villains in this fic. Would Telltale GOT be included as well?

this was a great and interesting read please update as soon as you can please

well this is very good indeed.

the Lannisters are sporting the trickster as a cousin and perhaps we shall see his tricks put to use in favor in the upcoming battles with Tyrions mind.

Oswald being a Frey and being Robbs Bannerman...this can either be good or bad. good in that Oswald can be the devious person Robb needs to win the war as intelligence and deception are very important in times of war, or a very bad thing in that Oswald could be using Robb as a means to gain power for himself and eventually make things worse for the north.

We also be getting some killer croc mentions and some new magical cults that have been sprouting about. So seems will be getting crazy from there.

wonder how Neds execution will go as batman is still far away from kings landing so the bat won't be able to save the day.

looking forward to the next one.

Hope you continue!

Was that poison ivy at the end? Please let it be her.