i love this chapter and I've read it over a million times. great work. And at this point, i really want to make Art on moments in this fanfic. Especially a certain moment in this chapter.

You’re right; every fic featuring Ed needs a hospital scene xD

This was a lot of fun! I really enjoyed just a good, old fashioned torture/escape/dueling it out in the snow fic c: Thanks for writing! :D

I absolutely love your train of thought xD

This chapter was an emotional rollercoaster and I barely handled it.

I didn’t know that about burns, but I assume there’s a point where you don’t really care xD

THIS IS A ABSOLUTE MASTERPIECE! Literally struck down in the feels. The story is great and the writing is just as awesome. I really hope you continue to write great stories like these. But, one problem. HIW THE FRICK DID THE HOMUNCULI GET INVOLVED IN THIS!? then again, if something goes wrong the homunculi probably have something to do with it.

You’re right, Ed. It’s not reckless if you don’t get caught xD

Poor Dale :c

But POOR AL. I thought you did a great job with Al though! And Hughes c:

I must frequently be hypothermic then xD

This was sufficiently fluffy, thank you c:

All your cold weather stuff seems plenty believable to me. As a “Survivor Man” binge watcher, I see nothing wrong xD

Ed, where are you?!

Canon enough xD I love ‘03 a looot lol.

You’re right; snow is cold and gross and not worth living in xD (says the person that sees snow maybe 48 hours a year).

Mustang is such a good dad c: look at him go.

Cheap excuses make the fan fic world go round xD I buy it.

Evie, you the weak link, my dude xD

Okay, here we goooo.

An excellent start :D and Mustang’s comment about not saying anything stupid; it got me xD