Please please continue this story i beg you please this is one of the best fics i have read

This is an actual garbage no normal person would act like this after being denied the right to meet their child for the better part of a decade

And quite honestly looking at your history it’s not a surprise that you’re into bastardizing the characters with nonsensical crackships that have nothing to do with the characters and everything to do with your gross fetishes

It bleeds through every chapter of this garbage story

update please!

This fic is so good
The story is so entertraining, so I keep reading this fic until ch 24, but I found out this story wasn't complete
I hope the author would continue this fic until complete, and i hope this fic wouldn't discontinue or hiatus
SO KEEP GOING, okay?

I hate when people abandon fics in cliffhangers.

Please update this story is too good to be not continued i wanna know what happens next

This story is awesome! Please continue...

Aw, I hope there's gonna be more! I can't wait to read what happens next! That'd be nice if Boruto's 9 Tails chakra comes back on it's own, gradually. You know, since it's part of his DNA. Kind of like a glass of some beverage replenishing itself.

I know that many anime uses this type of storytelling, but I never understood why the writers would have people talking when their relative is in immediate danger. Maybe if they were on the way to saving them it would work better. In this world's case, discussing things while heading to their destination. Still, nice chapter!

i just realized something... so hinata got pregnant at 17 and is now about 29, boruto is 12... so would that NOT make sense if sarada,chouchou,shikadai and the others are the same age as him unless all of them decided to get married at 17

tip to you: choose one pov either it's first person or third person don't switch between them, it makes it kinda... seperate

I like your writing style. I haven't read something like this on this website for a while

Why on earth would they wait a night to get to Boruto though? It's probably for plot and stuff, but that totally goes against... any of their personalities or principles. One teleporation wouldn't wear Sasuke out, and even if it did, everyone else would still be perfectly fine. Boruto could be dying for all they knew. Nothing would stop mother Hinata for trying to reach him ASAP; there's no way in heck Sasuke would let anyone stop or slow down for him just because he's 'weakened'; Sakura would probably take two steps: 1. plan quickly, 2. begin; and Naruto? He's the king of I'm-rushing-head-on-without-care-for-the-consequences-and-making-this-up-along-the-way.
Sorry, haha. Can't help trying to point out stuff that doesn't fit.
Can't the Tailed Beasts just decide when not to pay attention to what their host is experiencing? Yeah?
Haha, anyways, I'm enjoying reading!

You know though, since Boruto is still about the same age as Sarada, Chouchou, Shikadai, Inojin and co., are you also saying that all of them were conceived while their parents were 17 or 18? And they married super early and stuff?
I also find the reasoning of the Hyuuga Elders pretty unrealistic, because everyone loves Naruto now. But yeah, it's probably the best option. Either than that, great story!

Glad finally you update your story. This chapter took you along time. Hope next chapter not too long to wait. Because I really enjoy your story. Thanks for update.