WTF!

I never knew I needed an image of Mewtwo eating pizza in my life. Thanks for that. Though bringing back the dark PokéBalls to use as storage capsules was something I never considered. Clever.

Following just in case, but it looks to be a shame there may not be any further updates to this. It's a little disappointing, as this feels like it could've been a nice "buddies on a journey" story or even a screwball comedy. Ah, well, it was a fun little read.

This is probably the nicest MewxMewtwo story I've read. Please continue!

Do you have a release date for the next chapter?

This has to be one of the few good fics I've read revolving around mew and mewtwo without containing some cheesy romance plot. are you going to continue this? Because I would love to see more!

I am now convinced that mewtwo is secretly a massive pervert.

I love the atmosphere in this, hope you find time to write more.

I love Mewtwo and I love this story !

An interesting start. If you are going by the anime, I wonder what will Mewtwo's reaction to Ash "I've saved the life of most legendaries" Ketchum and all the crazy stuff that happens to him after their meetings

Hah! I like this already. I can see that you are having him go to places that Ash and his friends went to. Omg, it would be funny as hell if Mewtwo ends up going on a hippie styled road trip with Mew, Ash, and maybe Jirachi just for the lulz. I bet they're all a riot when drunk on pokeblock wine lol.

mewtwo discovering his libido...will this be getting a rating bump to m in the future, or will it mostly be mentions of stuff and innuendo? just curious

This should be interesting. Any chance of Mewtwo and Mew get involved in the Unknown mess. Frankly everyone got lucky in canon that things didn't get worse considering what the Unknown are capable of when there's a lot of them.

You're formatting dialogue incorrectly. Dialogue is written as ["Hello," she said] or ["Hello!" she said], never ["Hello." She said] or ["Hello", she said] or ["Hello" she said]. This is because dialogue and speech tags are considered to be part of the same sentence, so they have to flow together. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn't contain a speech verb. In that case, the second part iis/i considered a separate sentence, so it's written as ["Hello." She grinned], never ["Hello," she grinned]. Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like "laughed" or "giggled" is in the second category. Furthermore, if you're breaking up two complete sentences it's ["Hi," she said. "This is it."] not ["Hi," she said, "this is it."] or ["Hi," she said "this is it."] And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's ["Hi. This," she said, "is it."] The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don't use quotation marks (or single quotes) with thoughts. This is because quotation marks for thoughts make it look like your characters are talking out loud, which is confusing to the reader.

["Yes," He answered telepathically]

Shouldn't that be in italics instead of quotes, then?

You should separate your author notes with horizontal lines; otherwise, they look like part of the story.

Huh, a rather interesting scenario but I'm the opposite, I've only watched the first season of the anime, a few, I think the first three movies but have played most of the games. This story is something I can't wait to see evolve (heh, evolve...)

cant wait til he meets darkrai...lol 'no effect' or if he meets some of the bigger legendarys..