This is so amazing. You manage to put so much world building into 7 chapters and I love every bit of it.

I LOVE THIS. SO MUCH. Stalker!pein mixed with protective!pein? Yes please I am ready for our girl, Sakura. Again, stellar writing!

Gahhhhh! This is so great! The way you write Sakura is quite possibly one of my fave ways to read her.

I absolutely LOVE this story and can’t wait for more chapters.

I'm lovin this

gracian... is that a thing... xD

I would LOVE to see a sequel to this

This is really good! Definitely picking up the Klaroline vibes. I like the subtle world building and character expansion that hints at mystery and helps grow the characters more naturally into this other world you've established.

Please wrote more Peinsaku

I love, love, love this story. I wish there was more, but I get why you stopped where you did.

I see a few typos and the occasional structure possibility, but I adore your writing.

Thank you for doing this one, no matter how late to the game I am.

Love,
Mme

I enjoy ed reading this story!

awesome

Your work is magnificent. I don’t know why I enjoy Sakura being beat up so much, but she’s so resilient and fierce. It’s beautiful.

Stalker Pein was hilarious and I totally love Naruto and Shikamaru to pieces. The story with Ino had me in tears though...way messed up what that old witch did.
Congratz on a wonderful and intriguing story.
L

I think this was a beautiful ending. I liked that Sakura didn’t just give in to Pein and wants to make him work for it a bit. That he actually will mean everything he said. Wonderful.