Reviews for Dare You To Move
chellekathrynnn chapter 44 . 4/15
I’m so sad you’ve abandoned this
CyberWolfWrites chapter 44 . 11/14/2019
Would it be correct if I assumed that you no longer have plans on updating this story?
Ediblemurderer chapter 44 . 9/13/2019
After binge reading the whole story, I notice
.. Last updated in 2017.
It's such a great story! I still hope you will update it
AdriLAAAxo chapter 18 . 5/20/2019
Actually, it’s 2019. lmao
ImBritishNotPosh chapter 37 . 3/27/2019
I think I've said this before, but it seems like all Amethyst does is apologise when she's not doing anything wrong. Not only that, but everybody expects her too and all the blame is placed on her shoulders.
Other than that I do genuinely really like the story, but why does nobody every apologise to her? It's like they all want her to become a different person.
Nina3KPop chapter 20 . 8/19/2018
I really liked seeing things from jaspers point of view
littlemissy3982 chapter 1 . 8/14/2018
Hello! This is such a wonderful story! It is just as good as the original Twilight if not better! Please come back and update!
Isalynne14 chapter 42 . 8/14/2018
I think there’s an issue with this chapter I can’t seem to see anything on it. Would really appreciate if you’d finish it quickly! It’s a great story c;
daisy2daizy chapter 44 . 7/15/2018
Come back! What happens? I literally stayed up the entire night reading this haha, I haven't pulled an all nighter to read a story in years I loved this!
Guest chapter 44 . 7/1/2018
I can’t wait for the next chapter! :D
JJ-SNAPE-96 chapter 44 . 6/8/2018
Your story is amazing, I love how she reacted when she found out about them )
Do you plan on changing her? and is there gonna be more Jasper and Amethyst love moments
Please please update soon
delypanda chapter 31 . 4/17/2018
I'm not really annoyed at Amethyst's reaction haha it's actually normal! I've always felt Bella's reaction was abnormal while reading the books I mean who would actually push and want to get closer to someone you think is a vampire that you didn't know was vegetarian
If anything, I'm more annoyed at the back and forth between Jasper and Amethyst like she goes back to him too easily buts that just me. It's not annoying enough for me to stop reading ;)
It's your story like you said and you should write it the way you want to :)
Been enjoying so far, liking Amethyst's character and the pre-book/movie set up!
ImBritishNotPosh chapter 44 . 2/1/2018
I really hope you update soon!
I'm not going to hold me breath, because its been so long since the last update. However, it is a really good piece of writing and thats always hard to find.
Mia M.J chapter 44 . 1/9/2018
Alright, i don’t care how long it will take you to update this, just know that I WILL be there to follow Amethysts story no matter what because I simply love it and it just cannot be long enough for him.
It’s so refreshing to find something so well written and well constructed, I love your character, she’s strong and passionate and she’s got her feet on earth, doesn’t pry into people’s personal lives and draw crazy conclusions and she minds her own business while taking no bullshit. You’ve handled the « vampire revelation » really well in my opinion especially as you’ve followed canon which could not have been simple to do considering how silly canon can be sometimes - especially in these particular books’ case.
There are some things I really want you to address in this story such as I can’t wait to see how you’ll handle the whole New Moon events (if you make Jasper break up with her again I shall be very mad - but I trust you to do it well even if you chose to go down that road), hoping your story will go that far and I also can’t wait for Amethyst to pull the alarm strings about Edwards behaviour towards Bella in Eclipse - provided that you agree with me on that one - and set some things straight. I know she doesn’t normally interfere and she doesn’t seem to really give a about Bella, but I’m hoping you’ll find this too good an opportunity to pass up, same as I do.
This is starting to make for a really long and boring review isn’t it ? Well you deserve it after slaving through 44 chapters of this little wonder and I can’t thank you enough for the great moments you’ve provided me with this and I hope you’ll keep going. No pressure though, I’m better than Jasper and Edward combined when it comes to this : I’ll wait as long as it takes.
Also, your story is way to good to be content with only fragments in my opinion so I will be very happy to wait for the full story.
I do apologise if my autocorrect has been playing tricks on me while writing this review, I’m way too lazy to proofread this on my phone. Hope it’ll make sense anyway !
CreativeDragonfly chapter 24 . 10/28/2017
Why is she using a safety pin to check her blood sugar. She should have a finger pricker and hygienic needles.
123 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »