Reviews for The Servant and the Lord |
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Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2017 It's a vert good odea with an interesting plot, i hope you Will continue! Escuse any mistale, English is not my tongue |
izzy Uchiha chapter 1 . 7/9/2016 Awesome story! She could be named Amelia. |
Ophelia chapter 1 . 6/28/2016 This could be nice. Cant wait for the next chapter |
Alicia Olivia Mirza chapter 1 . 6/29/2016 Hey! Rather interesting idea :3 Though, Harry is a half-blood (with known ancestry), so wouldn't he have to stay with James? Anyways, I'm rather curious where this story is going! Also, if you are going to write in multiply point of views I would suggest using third person instead of first person point of view. Alicia :) |