Ok so her constantly getting rescued is getting annoying. The normal Shepard didnt yet the badass raised by krogans is getting saved left and right.

This is good, boarding on great. Frankly with writing like this you need to work to get published. I noticed a few grammatical errors, bit otherwise pretty amazing. That said, fuck that ending. That was a cliff hanger of all cliff hangers. So much more story to tell. Overal, great fic, a must read if you love the Krogan. However, the ending feels unfinished. The author made Mass Effect his own world, changing it just enough that picturing the finish line is near impossible.

Excellent story, I enjoyed it a lot/very much. Despite the loose ends of the story it was a good ending, I only wish I could read Tali's and Jaq's reactions to Shard's new tak.

The AU I never knew I wanted but instantly love.

I think that your 'few loose ends' are the understatement of the century! What about Saren? What about the Reapers? Surely there is plenty of info to continue this story? What about the possibility of a civil war? The Citadel remaining neutral and letting the humans fight it out? Maybe the Krogan could help the non-supremacist-human-side because of their human nature? (unlikely but still)

There is so much to still go on! What about Andromeda? I don't know the dates out of the top of my head, but perhaps the entire Krogan race could make a gamble and build multiple Arks to go to the Andromeda system?

Really, this story has still SO much potential! If you need inspiration, I could help you with plenty of points to go on. That's just an offer though.

Kingdark

Her name is jaq? Awesome.
in my language jaq means jerking off. :D

Mind. Blown! To date, one of the BEST AU stories I've read for the ME continuum. I couldn't even put this story down from chapter one, it wad that great of a ride. I honestly hope to see a sequel to this story.

Jaq and Shard are ...well...so freakin awesome. Man, I know that I have to go to sleep now but I seem to be unable to stop reading!

wow...what a way to start a story. Truly awesome work there. I can hardly wait to begin with the next chapter. Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful story. NOM

thanks for this awesome stor,. i hope that you write some seqeal soon. Your writing is great and i juat love the krogan and other charakter.

Best story I have red in my life

I got one am very proud of your accomplishment here. Great job.

aww this was one of only 2 mass effect stories i actually read that were updating actively

I'm glad to be able to read this. Nothing wrong with ending it on your terms that you want. Though if a sequel ever comes out I'm so there for it. Enjoyed this story very much.

Well Ka'tar just inherit the craziest parents. Only of the three is sane at most times. Jaq is going to spoil and corrupt her rotten. Sukar never lied about his goals not one time.