That was actually quite hot when he started kissing her but I have to say that even I would probably stop and take a look at her butt being on display because the image is cute lol

I really liked this chapter, and it's interesting to see all of Belle's doubts and worries about Rumple. I am excited to see what her reaction will be to Milah. I was disappointed that this was never addressed in the show, and she never confronted Rumple about it, considering how that would highly disturb most people... If I ever actually get anything written, I'll be sure to let you know, but I'm not sure if that'll ever happen. I seem to get some ideas and then my muse deserts me. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm never gonna stop shipping Captain Beauty despite the fact that I know it'll never happen, but that's what fan fiction is for!

I love the first chapter! Any chance you'll continue ?
Thanks!

I loved the original restraint. It was so good, but as a writer, I totally get the need to revamp. Omg this new chapter was so good. I felt like the dialogue was so good and Belle's internal monologue was really well done. I felt like I was in her head. Like i could feel every moment as it was happened.

Ugh your Hook as always is everything. You just remind me of why I love him so much, and why I want him with Belle as well.

I need more.

Oh! This is so wonderful! Restraint was the first CaptainBeauty story I ever read, and I simply adore it. I've also read all of your other CaptainBeauty stories (some multiple times), and they are wonderful too! Honestly, I love your stories so much, I was motivated to try my hand at writing some fan fiction that's still in the planing stages. (CaptainBeauty, obviously!) Anyway, I can't wait to read this revamped version even though I still love the original.

Glad you are back! I like your stories very much!
Keep up the good work!