Poor Thomas. There's no doubt in my mind that he loved Edith more than he'd ever loved anyone. I loved this story, well done!

This was perfect. I was so sad when he died. At least this way, they have an ending. Even a bittersweet one.

This was a far more satisfying end than the movie and the language stayed true to the time period. Perfect, I needed this thank you 3

Beautiful.. You captured his fears and his doubts accurately.

I loved the movie even though Thomas had to die in the end. But this is definitely a worthy alternative.

Love,
FF.

Nice work! Liked it, wish there was more of it!

I love this, I was horrified when he died in the movie. His death is fresh in my mind because I must finished watching the movie ten minutes ago