I do like this story... But not as much as I love Tender Sea... It had that craving feeling and ability to make me feel deep... This version feels a bit rushed with some blank spaces... I'm sure you'll be able to at least make it as wonderful as tender sea!
I believe in you!

Loving the Shisui moments at the end there! Great work! Hoping to see more! :)

When will you update this story again? This story is really good. I luv it. I wish you would update it again

This is interesting but I actually prefer the original version but it seems weird that neither the Uchiha or Sandaime requested a blood test. I would think that the Uchiha would want to know who she had been related to and with her looking so much like Minato it's surprising that it was not investigated. I'm looking forward to reading more and hoping she bonds with Itachi, Shisui, Kakashi, Minato and Kushina.

This rewrite is fantastic. I hope that you continue the story! Thank you for sharing

*cries*

awwww... I was hoping it would continue. lost track of chapters and tried twice to go to the next one before actually looking to see if their was more. great job.

not going to lie, the original was good but the growth in your writing between the original version and this one is very clear! you're awesome!

it's Sooo cute! looking forward to more updates

I was a fan of the original Tender Sea, the revamp and now that I’ve read this one I like it a lot too. I was so pleasantly surprised with the inclusion of Shisui in this one, and ecstatic because he is my very favorite Uchiha of all time. I also had him refer to Naruto as “his Sunshine” in my own (very shitty and not as awesome in any way as yours) story.
It was a nifty little coincidence that just tickled my fancy for some reason. I also really like how tame Miyu is, as well as the subtle remains of her previous mannerisms shining through her colder exterior. She’s so melancholy yet simultaneously soothing. I can’t help but hope for the very best for her.
Thank you for sharing your story.
-Kamui

liked the first one, and i like this one too... looking forward to how it proceeds; more so now that yoh have promised some romance and less 'dreams'

Please please please update

loved the orginal version it I love this too. hopefully you are going to continue

Continue
please

Ah, your skill as a writer and storyteller has expanded and improved so much! I remember reading the original fic forever ago and I much as I loved that one, I love this! I’m really enjoying the characterization and little details weaved in. “It was love at first sight”, that’s one way to answer a question. Poor little Kakashi, lol. Looking forward to the rest of the story!