ajja que cosas jajaa les cayo la poli conejuda jaja

jaja esa es una conejita que si sabe lo que quiere

ajaaja nunca secuestres al zorro de un conejito

thanks for making sure this isnt a cliffhanger like many stories, it was decent and very enjoyable (:

Also, I'm hoping you meant "You...Not...Me", rather than "You...Not...Met"

"What's so funny, fox?" Fox should be capitalized since it's being used as a nickname.

So is this the end of it? It's not bad, but it does feel kinda rushed, y'know? Anyway, I've had a lot of fun reading this story, and I'm sad to it end. If this really is the end of it, that is. :)

Loved it! I was a little disappointed in the sudden ending but it's cool. Will you do an epilogue or something to bring full closure or just leave this where it is? Just outta curiosity.

Hi,
Is there any way you can do a chapter a day / week? Pretty please? can you try to?
I check here everyday:D

Totally an epic story man, but Fangmire's actually a boy by the way.

The minute I heard that he was a tailor AND a fox, I knew it must've been Nick's dad. I like how this chapter focused a lot on Judy and Finnick, I just love the idea of those two working together. In the movie, when Judy shows up at Fin's van looking for Nick, I thought that's what was going to happen. Her and Fin would team up to look for Nick, and I was pretty disappointed when that didn't happen. If they make a sequel it should definitely have more Finnick in it, right!? :)

It's been a week, so I'm expecting

This has got to be one of the best AU's I've ever read

Pls don't stop

-BlueberryCarrots

Thanks for the descriptions of some characters!
You should put that in chapter 1, for every single character in your story.

I really liked this chapter, please make the next ASAP! Also, thanks for the update on Nick:)
how much longer are you planning for this story to go/ how many more chapters? You have quite a collection.
Man, Judy must look so bad...no shower, no sleep, no eating...plus her mental state, and she is deep down affected by her violent actions, that's for sure.

We are all waiting to hear Amanda's story. Let her rip!

There were a few more grammatical errors then usual, but it was still a good chapter. I assume the mystery couple were Dark's parents? I keep getting this feeling that Dark doesn't really like what he's doing, y'know? Like he'd rather have a more 'normal' life. I don't know. :)

Basically..yeah. I've lost the story entirely now. I can't remember who Higgins is or what last happened with whom doing what...I probably should have read 17 before jumping to this chapter...
I disagree MOST STRONGLY with Mr. Shortman; I actually believe Judy should get out of this story not only alive, but end up somehow redeemed; the real Judy would never run away/ remain dead, as that continues to pain others beyond my comprehension...I don't think Judy could live with herself for that... I mean, she hasn't even APOLOGIZED TO HER PARENTS!
If Judy is really herself...well, the hard truth is that Judy would actually rather turn herself in for Nick's life/freedom/ or even a fellow officer, since she's willing to do anything for Nick, as I can 99% quote you on. You might want to consider switching it up and having Judy captured by what's-his-name-dealer in exchange for Nick, and Nick having to save Judy...would definitely be interesting, so consider it, even for a next story/ part 2?
(Please continue your story, just can we mix a bit more classic Judy in?:D I strongly believe you can swing this! I'd like a good dash of old Judy in this, pretty please, even if it's at the end...) Remember the basic character that you are building (piggy backing) off of. Nick I find is often more in character then Judy is to me; especially his cockiness. I can actually picture him more clearly in my mind based off what you've created...Judy is more a contorted blur... Speaking of which, are we ever going to hear from Nick again?! I mean, the guy is alive, right?! Now if you kill my 2 favorite characters...man, war...
I do, however, love all the new characters! Such expansion...I don't even know how you keep track of everybody!
Also, just for the record, I thought Judy wasn't going to kill any body who was innocent. That just shows how utterly confused I am. YOU NEARLY REDEEMED HER WITH FINNICK! UGH.
I am wondering if this story is based of some crime movie/ book and you've just adjusted it to Zootopia? I'd really like to know if this is the case and IT IS based off something.
Thanks for continuing the story! Can't wait to see what happens.
Please remember everything is my opinion:) take it with a spoonful of salt!

Really awesome chapter! I knew they'd find out Judy was still alive if she had to work so closely with them on the rescue mission, but I thought she'd be the one to slip up though. I didn't think someone else would blow her cover, but at least they know now. Judy might not want to drag anyone else down with her, but I have a feeling she's going to need more assistance from the ZPD later. Y'know I was thinking, almost everyone thinks that both Judy and Nick are dead, and when this is all over Judy's going to be in a lot of trouble for all the criminal activity she's involved in lately. So, it seems to me that their best course of action would be to 'stay dead', and use all that money to make themselves 'disappear'. :)