Hope this gets continued

I never I’d say this, but poor Shinji. He lost his nastier traits in the story allowing his sympathetic qualities to shine while remaining true to his bison personality. It seems Heaven’s Feel gets him killed even if he’s not a scumbag. Kinda of a cruel move there Sakura, driving a guy to suicide. I imagine Kotomine is enjoying himself.

Damn that was one hell Cliffhanger, that I hope isnt left hanging.
PLEASE CONTINue I want more of this story.
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Wow, this is a great story, I can't wait to read more!

dang, and shirou hasn't even realised the connection to their relationship either, it's only going to get worse from here...

i wonder how shirou will react to this set of revalations though shinji also deserves props for bringing it forward

shame that caster couldnt unleash her powers on the shadow...

oh shit, rin's cracking, hopefully shirou or his servant counterpart can figure something out

it seems like sakura went through a trial not dissimilar to shirou, its a shame she had a different sort of savior

it seems like rin pulled an anakin, hopefully things will turn out better though...

interesting matchup, i wonder if shirou has gotten a chance to internalise muramasa yet?

shinji's actually a not a terrible person after rin scared him straight, hopefully kirei wont just feed him to gilgamesh

if you think that the bad end would be the better story then go ahead, sometimes heroes dont get their happy ending and even love might not be enough to save the day

your take on Emiya's tale is heartbreaking, but i can tell you've planned it well, if shirou's name was used in that discussion then rin would have figured out his identity, as it would if an alternate version of herself had stood in luvia's place

rin's even more insecure, and for good reason, I wonder when/if she will realise what the cost of giving up the grail to be, though i suppose she could wish for zouken's utter destruction...