Reviews for Phantom Pains
Katoptris12 chapter 15 . 8/24/2018
The ending feels like that one part in the lion king with Simba and mufasa, in short, they jinxed themselves.
Scarbreathaway chapter 14 . 5/6/2018
Loved it can't wait for more!
Basket in a Nutcase chapter 8 . 12/6/2017
fRISK NO YOU JINXED IT
Basket in a Nutcase chapter 4 . 12/6/2017
NOW PRESENTING: FRISK THE BADASS
Basket in a Nutcase chapter 2 . 12/6/2017
LET THE CHOILD BE HAPPYYYYYYY
Yukai yami chapter 14 . 8/17/2017
I love the contrast of how little Frisk cares for herself since she loves everyone else THAT MUCH, and how Toriel and the others are just like "ACCEPT OUR LOVE!", haha. Also, learned a ton about fish from googling those names. Goblin sharks are scary and Maki fish look like something out of Pokemon. So this fic actually taught me stuff!
And man. The tension when Frisk admits to not knowing her birthday to everyone, how she doesn't see herself as a little kid... And her priceless reaction at seeing her dad in the sign! That was awesome! Of course, something tells me her load didn't go unnoticed...
Can't wait to read more. You're doing a stellar job!
Ruby chapter 14 . 8/3/2017
I'm loving this! I really think it goes into so much depth and care. You really hit every mark like no bit of detail gets left behind. Can't wait for sans to talk to frisk about everything like legit EVERYTHING. It's going to be amazing! Thanks for the fanfic :)!
kuro kyubi chapter 14 . 7/20/2017
Dude, i reallllyy buuuutttt reallly like your story, the way you are managing it, keeps me attent of what you are telling, even if the story goes in a slow pace (in my opinion) i love it! It keeps me on the edge of what is comming next, there are soo many questions, but so little answers, and the fact that the next chapter will rise more questions than answers just keep me intrigued, thank you for your awesome story, and keep it up!
Guest chapter 14 . 5/21/2017
This story is amazing! I love the small details you put in the story, like the detailed description of what frisk felt when they saw the sign.
Alex chapter 13 . 4/24/2017
Estos saltos de tiempo me confunden pero se capta la historia
See my smile chapter 12 . 2/19/2017
Good story hope you continue.
Guest chapter 12 . 2/15/2017
I really like the story, glad i found it and will be keeping an eye out for more in the future!
karrknight18 chapter 12 . 2/16/2017
Yay update! I'm loving this story so far :D
TinyAmbassadorFrisk chapter 11 . 12/28/2016
I'm really enjoying this story so far and I am looking forward to seeing how it will progress.
89ingenting chapter 11 . 12/25/2016
Wow, now I really want to see Toriel's reaction to Frisk's present. A lovely and cute christmas special this was.
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