I knew that it was Sasori!

WHAAT?! NOOOOOOO!

This is si interesting!

:(

I really like this!

This was good

This is such a cute story, with horror, romance and angst all mixed together amazingly. I really really enjoyed!

Dead or not, I still think the killer is Orochimaru :P

I thought this was a wonderful story. I mean it. There was a part of me that really didn't want the story to end because of what it was about.

This story was so cute. The sex scene was a bit awkward at first but then I laughed when naruto started to pull out cigarettes. and then it got hot.. like really hot. imagining what they did...anyway I really love your jokes too. especially the one about a police penis and a condom. it was so corny. but sometimes corny is the best :)

Ok I love this. My only problem is how Mikito didn't end up in jail for killing Fukaku. Don't get me wrong, I'm glad she didnt, I just want to know HOW?

cute story! slightly rushed but overall very nice, I don't understand the calling Sasuke mom thing, I know you are going with the whole annoying uke/girlish thing for Sasuke but I draw the line at confusing kids, unless he gets a sex change, he should be called dad or whatever but not mom, sorry a pet peeve of mine lol

ermm was going to wait till I finished to review but this chapter was so strange, started off so serious and sad and then the full on smut came out of nowhere but won't see me complaining lol but then the smoking was gross and wtf lol I don't think I have ever read such a random moment inserted while having sex like that haha

Oh no. Nope, not gonna cry. Not gonna...*cries*

OK, I don't scare that easily, but this shit is giving me chills. It's so descriptive that I can't help but picture this as a movie I'm watching. Or a darker version of ghost whisperer, which was my favorite show.