Please finish soon

What about pulling the darkness that is around Harry's magical core?

Traitors and turn-coats...I guess the more magical the less mentally steady.

I wish you had finished this story.

its been a while since i have re-read this one..i wonder what will be the reaction when they find out that astrid is a traitor..n i do hope that they can turn the twins into allies..narcissa and steven? hmm..insteresting..hahaha..soon angel is going to find out that clint has a wife n kids..n both r pregnant..well..in the movie, laura is pregnant anyway..so..keep up the good work..n update soon

am i the only one who thinks wanda is hot? im just not sure if it was the accent or her appearance but she was hot at least to me lol, also in age of ultron she had brownish black hair

update please!

What is thid marysue trash?

Love this story and can't wait to read more

Man it's like Writer block season in this time of the month because I have seen some of my favorite Story's (were) went through the same thing, they can be a pain sometime but they/your back doing story again that all it matter can't wait for you to update this story and that other story call (Loki's Family) Welcome back

ohhhhhh! esto si es misterioso y super wow!
quiero saber como le seguiras!

Hope you update this story soon I like this story.

I've read both of your stories, and while I can say that I am a fan, I guess I have... criticisms?

I get writing is hard, and that it takes a lot of work to put out a chapter. I'm not in any way ignoring the work you have to put out. But perhaps a disclaimer, to let people know that they can go months without getting a new chapter, is a wise idea. I'm writing this in September, two months after this story was published, and I've yet to see a second chapter.

Additionally, your ideas, while you have enjoyable scenes and great character interactions, are cluttered. Your transitions are a little hard to follow, and your break is an eyesore. It attracts all the attention, taking away from the story. I want to read what you're writing, not the name "LOKI" a lot.

And your timeline is weird. Harry Potter takes place in the nineties but the Avengers takes place in the 2010's. I get that it's an AU but I don't remember reading an actual timeline.

I must sound ungrateful. I do love this story. It's a wonderful premise, the main OC is surprisingly well developed. The characters have great interactions and you are good at forming tension.

All stories can improve, even JK Rowling wrote plot holes. I'm not saying it isn't good. I'm saying it has room to grow. Hopefully, I didn't step out of line and you can take my words into account. I loved the prequel to this, I am excited for the sequel, but my reading would be more enjoyable if it was easier to follow and more developed. But I get it, writing is hard, you have a life outside of fanfiction, and this is fanfiction, not the epitome of literature.

I just hope you take my words into account to expand the potential of these stories, especially now that you start the sequel.

excellent start

love story cant wait for new chapters