Are you still planning on making that sequel? Also, I think you need to work on your pacing. This story felt really rushed. I still liked it, though!

Wait, who's Ace? And what movie is he from?

Did-Did Saix just call Lexaeus "Lexy"? I-I'm sorry but that just took me out of the story. I mean, I'll still read it, but you should change it, because that is a REALLY OOC thing for him to say.

This was a great story. I don't know too much about Kingdom hearts but I loved this story a lot. Good job.

As someone who didn't play KH, I really enjoyed this fic! I'm ereally curious to see how your novel turns out.

Also, whenever I hear Xemnas's name, the first image to come to mind is Sephiroth. Which is weird, because I don't play FF either.

Can't wait!

Yaaay! Great chapter! I finally watched Wall-E. It was very good.

Damn that was cold Mansex no wonder madly wanted to betray you in the canon story lol. Is Larxene really gone too? Xemnas is gonna regret doing that to riku I bet

Oh that was close thought Larxene was te next to bite the dust , oh how ironic that Larxene is calling Axel a traitor to the orginzation lol

That was a noble sacrifice Lexeaus did , he didn't even really fight in this chapter poor guy just there to take the fall

No more surfer dude sad face made yeah it's more like changing his surroundings and being able to warp around and what lol I love the orginzation

I'm glad I'm not the only one that thinks of lexaues with the car Lexus

Whyyyyy Axel whyyyyy my poor zexy I wish inside out would be in Kingdom hearts 3

Nooooo Demyx! Well at least lightening queen is still around

Falling with style haha this is how kh2 should been with the orginzation having two attack at once but then again nearly half of the group was out of commession or left the group