This was amazing! I was so anxious and exited to see what was next I loved the ending.

All of these are so beautifully written.

*screams Back in Black by ACDC at the thought of Shiro where he belongs* Honestly, so glad this picked back up! Also, ahem, what was withthat last line? And then he wasn't? WHAT?! Can they just get a break?

You are a puppet master and my heart is your marionette. Raw and exposed: your writing is powerful. Lovely work.

Normally I don't care much for super future marriage fics, but I cannot dispute this adorability. I think it has to do with the way you set the scene. It's very believable in the hectic universe in which they live. And also what I said earlier about your ability to consicely summarize events and inner dialogue that deepens the relationship between them.

Gahh! My heart! It aches! Thank on those strings, went don't ya? Geez. Omg can't wait to read the next one!

Don't you step on Allura's heart, Shiro! It's so sweet and fluffy it makes me squeeee! Love.

Aaaggghhhh I love this! I can hear all the boxes in my head and everything is so pure and nicely connected. Effective summary(ish) stuff that quickly but organically advances the relationship. Beautiful my friend! Can't wait to read more!

I loved loved LOVED this chapter! You are amazing and wrote it so well. Thank you for sharing!

Yey! Some more Shallura!

Didn't think I'd find more lately...

Beautiful. I love this. So much! Thank you for sharing. :)

I love this!

UM
UM?
THIS PERFECT STAR WARS AU
IS KILLING ME
YES PLEASE?
and like yes lance is poe is good they both awesome latinos and keith as finn is so precious lowkey i headcanon hunk as rose theyre both so sweet full of heart and wonderful and so i guess pidge is rey or smthg? idk fam squad except THIS AU IS AWESOME

IT is just amazing!

I like this story I would say love but I'm not a big romantic so like is the word. It's funny and beautifully written I hope you improve in a good way.