Wasn't expecting the twist that Sans was Oliver, you actually subverted my expectations in a satisfying way, something a lot of professionally produced movies can't do. Wow that was amazing :)

Wow, I was right. By the 4th chapter, I knew Sans was going to die. I was right in an unexpected way.

Definitely a 10/10 story.

Wow. I just powered through that story in less than a day. Maybe an hour or two, to be honest.

You kinda made the plot twist obvious but for a while I thought I was wrong and I was scared how things would turn out. I like this though. However... I wanted to see Papyrus get his big brother back. Won't they tell the others?

KNEW IT! I! KNEW! IT!

I have a sneaking suspicion that Sans is somehow the kid.

I knew it!

I love you and I love this fic it was great and awesome and also best 3
best Sans backstory best conclusion

*Pat**Pat*story*pat*stolen by Tony Frisk*fainted*

oh man i love papyrus's unerring ability to tell people frisk is hiding from exactly how to find/identify frisk

The Jerry x Sans ship is real O_O [jk]

So. So. This was awesome. Thank you for creating this piece of art. I have tried coming up with ideas for Sans' backstory but so far, none have really worked. This story rocks.

This was a very good first chapter! Holy cow, I am HOOKED.

*guest name is username*

I called it. I CALLED IT.

Oh man, an epic retelling and conclusion to an amazing story! Well done and congrats!
I had the best of time reading this and even more just being able to try and figure out how everything might play out!
(Maybe, one day, you could "expand" on this universe you created by writing from the point in which Frisk decides to go to the humans instead of staying out and hiding with pap and Sans?)
I think your writing on that would be amazing!
Well, I'm off for now,

-LuminousMoonRay