Good story so far. Please post more to share with us.

Why is it that Pidge always has them/ they pronouns? Great story tho! Loveeeee it! PLEASE MORE

Please make more! need to see what happen next!:)

Please update soon! It's soooo hard to find Omegaverse Stories! And yours is REEEEAAAALLLLLLLLYYYYYYYY GOOD so far!

I'm looking froward to seeing how they all react to Lance being hurt from the crystal exploding.

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I love the pack idea
It's really creative as it's different to typical omega/alpha things
I really enjoy this story so far
I hope you continue updating :)

I just read this all in a day and I am so incredibly excited for where this is going. Keep up the good work!

Oh man you're back! I am so excited for the fall episode! I wonder how the pack dynamics will fare with their omega out of action... eagerly awaiting the next update!

I'm really loving this so far, I was never really one for the whole 'wolf beta, alpha' stuff, but I'm really digging this dynamic.

I'm curious to see how this will affect the plot!

Eek I need more! I'm loving this story so far!

another good chapter. i like how you stick to and point out the subtle character flaws and interactions in their personality's, from their own point of view. most people just dilute the characters down to their stereotypes. shiro isnt just spacedad, and you call that out without an obvious call out. good work.

This is a good story. Giving us diffrent perspectives, dynamics and, backgrounds for each paladin. It was for sure that Shiro was the alpha. Pidge is a beta but she is my favorite. She is kind fun and cool.
Hunk I thought would be the omega. But they are all very funny, just at diffrent times. Like in the first episode when pidge got her bayard. Well this was a good story and I hope you continue it! Your a great author and someday your name is gonna be on a bestseller! Good Luck!

Loved Shiro's point of view. One thing missing was Shiro's past relationship with Keith, but I'm also not sure it would have fit into the chapter either, and would have broken up the flow.

I really enjoyed reading this!