Reviews for Glowing In The Dark
NBoss01 chapter 17 . 12/14/2018
The story would of been 10x better if you didn't put a person's WHOLE NAME every time someone talks...
NBoss01 chapter 5 . 12/13/2018
This is the biggest wreck of a crossover ever...
NBoss01 chapter 2 . 12/13/2018
I hate how OOC Dipper and Mabel is in this.
zev.jagalur chapter 17 . 12/7/2018
HOW DARE YOU KILL BILL
DO A SEQUEL ABOUT HIS RETURN.
YOU ARE AWESOME AT THIS,BUT PLEASE DO THIS.
REVENGE MUST BE BILL' REVENGE.
[Pardon my language,but you get the AGAINST MASTER CIPHER MUST BE PUNISHED]
Thank You!
[P. if I sound rude or annoying,but my devotion to Bill will not allow me to do otherwise.]
Me chapter 6 . 11/29/2018
It was a great story until the crossover. And the weird confesion, and the fan service, and the poorly told repeats of popular episodes.
NBoss01 chapter 1 . 9/30/2017
I can't even...
NBoss01 chapter 1 . 9/29/2017
This was incredibly stupid... I'm sorry I had to say it.
It is understandable that you would want to do something cool to start you fix but doing the conversation Stan and Ford had was just retarded because in this situation what life was ruined if nothing happened yet? Why would Stan just sit there and watch them fight? I has been show that he can lift them u with one had each to brake up the fight. This was just stupidity to progress the plot Dude you rushed through the emotional stuff... you don't do that man! When you do that the interactions seems forced and off like this one. The fact that you mad Stan and Ford argue about the school and side points makes it feel bland. People do not change perspective so fast like Ford had a half ass point in the argument. the other fact is that you hardly put any creativity in how it changed from the show.
The Multifandomist chapter 17 . 11/13/2016
Can't wait until the next 2 chapters! OOOOHHHHH I WONDER IF THE LIZARD GUYS COMES BACK TO KILL DIPPER!?
Gamelover41592 chapter 17 . 11/11/2016
good job and nice work on this scene it is one of the best moments in Gravity falls :')
Gamelover41592 chapter 16 . 11/9/2016
nice work on this chapter and nice reunion as well
Gamelover41592 chapter 15 . 10/27/2016
awesome looking forward to the battle :D
Gamelover41592 chapter 14 . 10/21/2016
awesome looking forward to seeing how the finale plays off with everyone there :)
Gamelover41592 chapter 13 . 10/17/2016
great job on this chapter glad Dipper told Wendy also nice cliffhanger :)
Battleangel911 chapter 1 . 10/5/2016
This is an interesting alternative story. Can't wait to see where Dipper and Wendy end up. Also, I like how you did the dialogue in a script format.
Gamelover41592 chapter 12 . 10/5/2016
nice work on this chapter and man that was epic :D
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