Sorry, though I absolutely do not disagree; your intro reads more like the actual war will be in the background

You know? I think I was at the beginning shocked to find out about Sirius and Nigel's relationship but I think I'm finding it amusing now. The story's cool!

Ok! I found everything nice until now as I didn't expect Sirius to love men... It's a bit weird knowing he has always been a woman chaser. I thought that Nigel and him were more friends, than lovers. I'm not against LGBTQ or anything, but I don't like the turn of events.

Enjoyed both posted stories, disappointing you moved all the rest of them some place else but writers do what's best for them. Hope you might bring them back, best of luck.

Ignore any bad reviews. Don't let people stop you from writing this great story!

It feels so good to read about a mature and thinking Potter. I have been rereading the Order of the Phoenix and it bothers me how hot headed he is. Thank you for your hard work.

Well, so I havent read the chapter yet, just the authors notes at the top. Just felt the need to say that fanfiction is fanfiction. We write (honestly, I have just written a few paragraphs, but they might become more) this because we love to explore other possibilities in this wonderful world JKR created. Going outside Canon isnt just possible, but necessary to actually be able to call it fanfiction. Otherwise, people should just read the books. Again:) What those of us who have read the books a lot normally wants to see is a reason for the change. Either in the preview, explaining the change, or in the action. then, we (at least me) just go with the flow, and enjoy a good story. Those who vannet do this, as you said, should just hit the return button and find the original books. Good story so far:)

While I would love to see Harry get with Luna, I think you have a great story here. So far I find it very enjoyable and very well written. Thank you.

I loved the story but why did harry have to and up with Ginny!

Well done. It is always an honour to read a completed work, knowing the hours...and hours

And hours

And YEARS

Of effort involved in writing a story.

Especially where you have to put up with hateful and hurtful comments that try to make you stop writing.
So, thank you for persevering through to the end. I enjoyed it.

When the car is driving crazily...I always wondered what would happen if a squib, who didn’t know they were one, saw the car or even the knight bus driving crazily through traffic, started to give chase when it suddenly disappeared...what would they do/think?

I often wondered if Percy had been told about Peter Pettigrew being Scabbers. I don’t think he was, because IF he was, then he would be a right Prat. I really like it.

I really like your writing style. I love the humour you interject with little asides. I will have to go back and find it and comment on it, but your chapter in ‘Take a look through my eyes’ where Harry and Neville try to find Neville a wand, and find his magic instead. I read it out to my daughter and we were both howling with laughter.

I will be coming over to AO3 to find you, just not sure when. I’m finally getting my life back on track and back to writing now that I have finally found out what has been physically wrong with me for 32 years. Or thereabouts.

I love your A/N, especially your rant about LGBTQ and whatever other letters are needed. Eventually we might actually have a full rainbow in the world, but for now it is incomplete.

And now...that I’ve climbed down off my soapbox of ranting...on with the story...glasses on...tea in hand... flips page

So you protect the castle with the fidelius charm then removed it so you could still have the battle of Hogwarts? Then Percy says “ We mustn’t let our guard down”.

I am enjoying this story, but your beta missed a big continuity error here - in the last chapter, you have Tonks and Remus telling Sirius they are official, which he tells Hermione and Harry. Then in this chapter, you have him use the fact they aren't together to comfort Hermione.