Cool! We're finally meeting Shanks!

He's just so bad at lying.

Ha! Damn, I was hoping to see a few traveling shenanigans. I do love ninja Garp tho.

I was not expecting that! You've shattered my soul. I'm crying.

I'm looking forward to this. It looks pretty fun!

I fuckin love terry

wow Shanks is a yonko level with his crew duh.

You could just hide the hat in your room you don't gotta throw it across the ocean mate

Really this story is sooo interesting ! An entire different goal for Luffy (Delta) and he seems to have a different personality too. I like how things are turning out ! The fact that Delta scared his brothers is the motive to go back sailing it's a good idea
I really wanna know what's gonna happem in the New World ! Will he meet Youkou like Big Mom or Whitebeard even Kaidou ?
Will Delta fight Admirals or Garp ?
After achieveing this goal will Delta really go back to Dawn Island ? If yes, what will happen to Robin and Terry ?
Too many questions are in my head ! Please I really want you to continue this story ! It's so interesting

You leave me on a cliff, stranded in the middle of nowhere and I gotta know what I have to do to get off it! The suspense, the twists and turns, him fighting Shanks... I love it all! Your story is magnificent!

It was a really nice moment when they all were laying on deck, chatting. Very enjoyable and calm...
I absolutely love Terry. He’s one of the greatest OC’s I’ve read about. I felt bad for him when he was flashily captured, maybe train a bit? Or is he going to keep being a goofball? I don’t mind that either.
I also like how you write Robin. Younger and less experienced, doesn’t know how to socialise that well. Slowly opening up.
I will say that I think Delta is a bit serious. But it doesn’t bother me.

This is one thing I’ve though about a lot actually. Why don’t people just climb the red line, I mean yea most scan’t but the strong ones could. Would be easy to get to Raftel. But they probably don’t waant easy.

Didn’t you write what Luffy was 8 when Delta left? Then Robin should be 19. She was 28 when she was introduced and Luffy was 17 at that time. So there’s a 11 years differance between them. And you also wrote in the first chapter that Delta was 23. So if he left when Luffy was 8 then he should be 25.

Of course, this isn’t really That important. The age of characters is just something I tend to notice,

He’s going to see Robin? Nice!
It will be weird and funny with their age roles switched, with Luffy being what? 24? And Robin 17-18.

You nerfed the red hair pirates.
Shanks will become a Yonko, his crew is not weak, and he himself even less so.