Reviews for The Oracle: Remastered |
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ghd chapter 1 . 4/11 can you make him into a baby |
Guest chapter 16 . 1/1/2019 Please continue! |
Mandalore Requiem chapter 16 . 12/4/2018 Damn good read. I’m glad I stumbled upon you mate. Sorry to hear life’s been tossing you some bad lemons. |
Mandalore Requiem chapter 4 . 12/4/2018 Christ… the way you describe yourself is eerily familiar to myself. I always wanted to be a father, and I don’t trust easily. Which why the few I do let are all the more precious. No doubt you’ve already figured it out already, but you not alone. Keep pushing we got future younglings waiting for us. |
Vlad th3 inhaler chapter 16 . 4/30/2018 please, another chapter I really love this story. |
marquis.shax chapter 16 . 3/17/2018 yeah I don't buy that spy network bullshit there's no way Jiraiya absolutely needs to be out of the village for so long an there's no way in hell that Jiraiya is able to get in every single village to spy on them when he's so well known an I'm pretty sure any ninja worth their position would know a henge when it's being used so he'd be unable to sneak in a village that way. Honestly I'd say send him out of the village one week a month to check with various informants that truly need to talk to him an for him to do anything else with his network that actually pertains to him. Hell look at the OLD SCHOOL spies like the OSS and even the CIA when it first started they had a commander like Wild Bill Donovan who'd control things from back home while allowing the people under him to do their own thing |
Mask chapter 16 . 2/18/2018 Update soon I need to know what happens next |
nacheell chapter 16 . 2/10/2018 Please update soon i cant wait foe the next chapter |
Ciel Blaze chapter 16 . 12/28/2017 This story has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work. |
Roxie.88 chapter 16 . 8/22/2017 great chapter answer awesome story so far. I look forward to finding out what happens next |
Simp Lord chapter 16 . 8/21/2017 Great Story so far hope you continue to write it's real goodKeep up the great work |
Rangle chapter 15 . 7/19/2017 Oh and btw your SI is supposed to have Kage chakra level but he gets exhausted by just a few moves. Even Naruto in the beginning of canon has way more stamina than him. Too many inconsistency if you just think about the details in the fanfic. |
Rangle chapter 14 . 7/19/2017 You shouldn't have given your SI the Rinnegan and knowledge from the Rikudou Sennin. It's a bit silly reading a Rinnegan user being knocked around by Anko. I don't know what's up with a lot of you fanfic authors giving powerful doujutsu to your characters and then nerfing them in a silly unrealistic ways. Maybe, you should rewrite this story again and refrain from giving him OP knowledge and the Rinnegan, hmmm? |
Rangle chapter 4 . 7/19/2017 Oh, at least he's not that foolish but more like a broken emo teens. |
Rangle chapter 2 . 7/19/2017 Sigh, the main character is a fool. I don't know if I want to read further. |