Not many solid Overwatch stories - particularly ones that aren't weird tracer/widow angst filled bad romance. I enjoyed this a lot. Simple, but sweet. Solid smut scene too ].

Thanks for sharing!

...She said My bed is a bed...

Oh man that Egoraptor reference killed me, great chapter

Damn. Can i just say, this was really fucking fun to read. Of the few OC centered fics ive read, this one was fucking amazing. Your character is the most human OC ive gotten the pleasure of reading. Damnit if he was an actual character in the game it could even pass as my OTP for it XD

This story was damn good and i can only hope the sequel is up (idk at this very moment) because if its even a fraction as good i know i'll enjoy it. The relationship, the dialogue, all of it. It was fun to read damnit.

keep up the good work! :)

"Wheres my mountain dew did you drink it? Let me smell your breath"

Really like this story however there are a few things that hold this story back in my opinion. A beta reader or another round or two of editing is definitely needed with several grammatical and spelling errors each chapter. Additionally, I find the world difficult to comprehend. Does overwatch exist in this au? If not then who drove the omnics back during the omnic crisis? What I loved about this story is 100% hana and josh. Their friendship is believable as is their relationship and I love their banter. I would however like Josh's character to be fleshed out more as right now he feels like an self insert with an interesting and complex personality. Final verdict is a 9/10 it's honestly the little things that hold this story back from perfection and I really enjoyed reading it.

Ok! Now you get the chance to flex your Starcraft knowledge (lets hope theres a lot of it). I mean, doubles is very very, very different when compared to singles. Can we get cameos from actual casters as well? That'd be fun.

huh.

Huh... Bit of a change there... Having multiple games to play for a single tournament. Wonder if he'll be up to the challenge? FIND OUT IN THE NEXT EPISODE OF- fine, fine, I'm leaving...

Hey I really liked the new ending, a lil bit surprised about the elimination of starcraft II but its cool, more variety means more room to explore no? Good work man 3

Just finished new game, can't wait for level up. Keep up the awesome work!

Well I'll be there for the new story. Just maybe make an announcement update for this one? Don't wanna miss it.

I just have to say... THIS WAS F*CKING AWESOME! Easily one of the best Overwatch fics I've read, and when it comes to that ending to the tournament I have to agree with Josh. Absolute BS but one of the most unexpected, hilarious, and all around epic endings I've ever seen. I must repeat, ABSOLUTELY F*CKING AWESOME!

I really like this so far after reading halfway through but I find it funny that one of Dva's rare voice lines says (although in Korean) that she could never beat her dad at Starcraft.

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