Absolutely loving this! Really hope you’ll update x

I gotta say - I LOVE that he tore into Rosalie like that. She SO deserves it. Great story, I am really enjoying it!

Hey,

I loved this chapter! You are such a fantastic writer and storyteller. I love how you have enhanced Edward and Bella as well as their relationship while still holding on to the essence of who they are. I just discovered this story and whipped through it so quickly! Can't wait for your next update.

All the best

love your stories!

You're right that Rosalie never got enough heat for her actions and bad behavior. It's why she's on my list of least favorite characters from Twilight. Her behavior in New Moon almost got Edward killed when she taunted him about Bella being dead. She should be grateful Bella never moved on like Edward said he wanted, because I have a feeling if Edward had been killed, Alice may have killed her in retaliation, or at the very least maimed her.

Speaking of Alice, do you intend to keep Alice from meddling in Edward and Bella's relationship? That's another thing that bugged me, the way she was constantly sticking her nose into what was going on with them. If her visions are subjective, and the future is in constant motion, then shouldn't she realize that she needs to keep out of what going on and let what happens happen?

Either way, I'm looking forward to what comes next.

I really love this story! It keeps me interested and I love the relationships that you are building here. EJ is so cute, and I love the sweetness of Bella and Edwards relationship. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Maybe just walk in first next tine instead of knocking? Poor Addie. I hope she’s ok. Why do I have a feeling this will come back to haunt them? What if CPS is called? I hope not but it could happen.

Poor kids. The rash, the itching, the mouth sores. The worst is seeing them in pain and not being able to fix it. Finally, Edward shows up to help.
Judy

Bella meets Emmett. She discovers that Rose may be a problem. She won't see Edward til 5:43 tomorrow evening.
Judy

Edward was there for Bella; to hold her and tell her she's loved and lovable, smart and worthy. Just what she needed.
Judy

Bella and Charlie are both trying to deal with Reneé's duplicity. I'm glad she has Jacob to talk to.
Judy

Bella is still dealing with her knowledge of what Edward is. Now she realized that her dad does love and want her. Her mother lied.
Judy

I love this story. It's so hard to find a good canon type vamp fic anymore. I like this Bella a lot. Loved the scene with her and Charlie figuring out what renee had done. Love EJ and addie, love this Edward. all of it.

Here's a review for chapter 18 and 19.

I appreciated how, in chapter 18, Bella kept referring to Charlie as her "dad". Even in her thoughts. It's a great touch.

I loved the conversation between Charlie and Bella in the morning. Him realizing that Bella hadn't spoken to her mother since her arrival (almost two months ago?). I love that he found out.

I really like the idea of Edward lending his car to Bella for her ride to Port Angeles. Or at least to go back home. I wasn't a fan of the scene, in the first book, where Edward and Alice brought her truck to school when they leave early, the day before the meadow scene.
I like the idea of Bella driving Edward's car without him. It's an interesting and cute way of showing that they are an item.
Also, the conversation with Charlie when she arrives home in Edward's car without Edward would have been interesting.
But in chapter 18, Edward never gave his keys to Bella. And they never officially decided that she wouldn't take his car.

The start of chapter 19 totally glanced over the car "incident". The chapter started with Bella in Angela's car.
I really feel like it was a missed opportunity. But maybe that's just me. Though I think it definitely was an oversight that the subject was never officially closed?

The second "scene" of chapter 19 when Bella comes back home and talks with her dad before going to bed was too short and skippy/jumping around. It felt like an enumeration of events and actions rather than a scene.
Enumerating all the events in Port Angeles (the multiple shoppings, the restaurant) then the drive home, then the conversation with Charlie, then the conversation with EJ, then the homework. It felt like a lot of jumping around in not so many paragraphs.
But I liked that Charlie gave Bella money for the kids' stuff. I like that it is part of the story.

I liked Edward and Bella's conversation over the phone. I was a bit sad that Edward didn't spend the night, I thought Bella would sleep with Edward from now on. But their conversation was nice.
I really loved how Edward begged her to not hang up. It was a great way to show his feelings. He's doing a better job than cannon Edward.

Poor babies! I bet Edward's cooler body temp will be A BIG HIT with them both! Although maybe with a light blanket in between (like an ice pack). As always, your story is all that's wonderful! Thank you!