I absolutely love your characterization and the back story you are building here! Like really, you should finish! Right more! If for no one else than for me! I love the pace and how this could really be there thoughts and how it's the actual story line you know? Not that you can't add your own flair to it cause I would love that too. But it's in your writing style also. It's not annoying that she goes back and forth on how she feels, if anything it humanizes her and make her more relatable because we all go over things over and over in our minds.

Very well written I like it a lot so far

A 14 year old girl and a 26 year old man. No matter how hard you try it is still messed up

A lovely chapter.

I just discovered this fiction today and I have to say that I really enjoyed it, I"m too lazy for writing a review for each chapter, but your way of writing Lyanna' character is very interesting and coherent.
There isn't much fictions about what really happened between Rhaegar and Lyanna so thank you for that and I can't wait for read more :)

Such a lovely chapter, I cant wait for read more :)

Yea! A new chapter
Please write more soon

Please keep writing

This was a nice start! Curious to see what happens next :).