Wow, this was hot and wild and very well written. One little bit of concrit: IMO, it would be hotter if you avoided the "c" word. That is such a harsh word and once it's written, it changes the tone ever so slightly. It can still be hard and hot and pornylicious but any word is better than "that" word to keep it sexy. I hope that makes sense. I also hope to read more from you. Will go off and search...

Oh man, I need a cold shower!

I would LOVE to read more of this story! PLEASE?

I love this so much. Brava as always. Thank you for enduring FF to post this. Xoxo

I really liked this, liked when writers show what different things could have happened during the scenes we don't get to see. Thank you.

Yaaasssss

Excellent little story...loved it!