Reviews for Omniverse Ninja
Danirodriguez1995 chapter 16 . 8/4
Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched.
robert krause chapter 9 . 8/1
sir in this one can Naruto had his time with max ben and others it the base as his working as some warrior ,when in his bed room is a cub size with a bed and his get a pic of woman on it too, when his get money to keep and when in time he more power and muslces so much too, when merlin is get his name out of the red and his doing it now ,and he and Naruto move no now, when back home Naruto had keeping to the back parts of the red light and was doing some body huthers jobs and get bad guys took out and money form it help too , like he and merlin had move to the whirlpool lands and put in a new vaillge and Naruto get over the universe he had took out big time bad guys and woman like and money form it help too for Naruto had get hackers skills and was find big time bad guys and find one goup of slavers he doing not took out ,but used the gold and others parts he get and buy out slaves grils woman and others to made his team now, the killer joys , he get star ships form the job and was good it too, when others he had he had them sell off to a star ship shops all over for money and was used it to get killer joy off and running and when in the whirlpool Naruto had put it a huts like homes and his own team base too,
Killthy chapter 16 . 7/28
Very good I hope you continue this story soon! Anyway, I'm really excited for the next chapter and keep up the great work!
Gold Testament chapter 10 . 7/7
I'm guessing Albedo's original Ultimatrix along with the Nemetrix.
Gold Testament chapter 7 . 7/7
Did you have to include the noisy cricket from MIB? Please tell me you also include the disperser J used in the cartoon series.
Gold Testament chapter 2 . 7/7
Huh, I thought it was Asmuth.
Guest chapter 16 . 7/5
Dammit I wanna see naruto fight looma and win then hook up. PLEASE UPDATE
Guest chapter 5 . 7/5
No zetsu a dead danzo is a damn good one, keep his ass dead no need to obito him.
Samuel Santillan chapter 15 . 5/25
cuando van a subir el capitulo 17 de verdad quiero saber q1ue pasara y naruto debe estar emparejado con Charmcaster
Uzu chapter 16 . 3/18
Please Naruto x Charmcaster
ortizale317 chapter 15 . 1/27
Awww I was hoping to see rook shar rooks sister in the pairing
ghoast.cc chapter 16 . 1/26
Will you make it so Naruto returns to his planet or is that permanently an no-go?
Kerenkay chapter 1 . 1/5
Just wondering where Hinata is
She's not part of the team ooor is she not present
Despzito chapter 16 . 12/6/2019
Please I beg keep this single pair of naruto and charmchester. Also please give a reply in the chapter.
Reasons:
(1)- It easier to write and more realistic because are most girl possessive share a guy and I highly doubt charmchester would share anything more especially a guy she likes/loves and considering the fact she jealous and angry when darkstar called Gwen "Lovely Gwen" and that she's very insecure I believe can see her personality would naruto to have a harem she's dating him.

(2)- Too many naruto crossovers have harem it would be interesting to read especially one as good as this has been make it one of the rare that doesn't give naruto a harem.

(3)- Charmcaster is a complex person who has grown up without the guidance of her father. Her only role model was her uncle Hex, which had caused her to develop a delinquent attitude and a lust for power. Charmcaster had spent some time in Juvenile Hall, being the target of bullies, which only made growing up more difficult. Due to the harshness and misfortune that has befallen her with every encounter with Ben, and especially Gwen, Hope had become quite resentful and bitter. To compensate for her insecurities, she always acts very arrogant and ego-driven, striving to prove her superiority over others and we all know naruto would understand her better then most. they're backstories are nearly the same but have different ways dealing with them. Naruto buried his resentment and bitterness and never show , he hides his insecurities by being brash and naruto had the third hokage to build help his morale compass instead of like a small romantic story and it's done right is written about this two it can form quite a good subplot.

(4)- It's also shown that naruto has a thing for girls with insecure and confidence issues. e.g. Sakura before she met Ino was insecure about her forehead and had very little confidence herself and if you are a naruto fan then you know of hinata's confidence issues.

Thank you for reading this long review and the people reading this masterpiece of fanfiction if you agree with just post a
#ShinobiCaster on the review page and If you have points to add this or changes to make please feel free to do so just no flames.
alphaprince0 chapter 1 . 11/9/2019
can you make it a harem with charmcaster and helen
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