Reviews for The Soldier Of Misfortune
Guest chapter 11 . 5/2
Madeira is also (?)(idk what’s that in English in Spanisch it’s vino and in German Wein)
lil b00tyflake chapter 1 . 4/30
Bro update this it’s so good! Excited to see what happens!
erigor chapter 13 . 2/11
update lol
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2019
Actual the best fanfic writer ever dude, love your work
Guest chapter 13 . 11/9/2019
Don't be sorry, I'm glad you updated! Can't shake off the RE vibes I'm getting.
Final Phantasmal chapter 13 . 11/10/2019
Great story, I read all of it in one go it's simply fantastic. Hope to get some more in due time.
Perseus Apollyon chapter 13 . 11/10/2019
The OG fic getting updated, I love it. Artemis is the baby momma, hopefully we get some more moments with her and Percy not about to fight or leave somewhere lol. Great work, hoping for more updates.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/26/2019
Omg, please don't have abandoned this
Idolon chapter 12 . 4/7/2019
Whoa! It's cool. Very! After a lot of Percy Gurdian of the Hunt fics this each one is something new, like a breath of fresh air.
Best of luck to You both writing and real life.
EMMASTONED chapter 1 . 3/27/2019
Oh man, they're so cute, PxA.
CLAYTONB123 chapter 9 . 3/23/2019
Really good
SonOfHades1 chapter 12 . 3/20/2019
Aye love that ur back man missed u lots. Anyways badass story and yeah cant wait for more of all of em
Calamity J chapter 12 . 3/19/2019
FINALLY!
DarkGamer159 chapter 12 . 3/19/2019
Nice to know that this story hasn't been forgotten. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Fringlish chapter 11 . 10/28/2018
Love this story but I see where you are coming from. you started with this hate/respect relationship that was the driving force behind the chapters but now they are together it makes it hard to find the same drive you had before. The start of the story was amazing due to this but the rest is just as good although it showed a bit in your writing that you became a bit lost with the story. I do hope you continue and finish the story though but try to avoid falling into the trap that others had and cause them to split or try and recapture the same tension they had before ( it very rarely works well) or have something happen to Artemis as that would detract from the first vibe of Artemis ultimate bad-ass that you established early on. Being vulnerable next to Perseus in an intimate setting is fine but not in the real world as it would not seem to match up with the rest of the lore you created.
Overall a great story that I see maybe 7-12 good chapters in it. focusing on what you hinted at with Artemis and maybe getting the family together and mythological tie-in. say that monsters adapted themselves and so did the gods because mortal world vision impacted them more so they adapted to it to an nth degree so power became money, etc... or working of the comic pulling the family together for a wedding trying to hunt them down and bumbling into a few covert operations. Either way, I hope you continue and now I have a hand cramp. I hope you are happy! Asking for reviews shiesh ( I mean we all do it but why do I always listen)
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