I like this premise, it sounds really interesting. Your writing style is also great! I can't wait for the next chapter!

This is only the first chapter and I already find this story amazing! You write very well, there are no grammar mistakes and your style is lovely. Plus, the plot seems really original: I love AU stories and Pai and Lettuce... Can't wait for tthe second chapter! :)

Good cool story obviously

OMG, where has this been my whole life!? I am so in love with this AU! Everything about it is so perfect! Absolutely amazing first chapter and absolutely amazing job writing Pie's character in this! :D