Yeah dumb

Nice idea please keep posting

Update please

I liked the initial idea and plan for the story, but it feels like Lucifer is too op, even at the start. The story is also progressing a bit too fast, but it could work out with some changes.

Like the story and content so far, but I would have went a other way with the white walker except the female. because other then the night king and his General . All the other was dead but I only seen the show and not read the book.

update plase

It's nice but is it a harem? ...say yes :)

This story's amending!

Wowsers! Please continue the story, the excitement thrills me!

Lucifer ha nice

It's nice :$

Well there are some problems with this story but nothing major.
The thing that's bugging me is the longsword part, a normal man can use a longsword one-handed, for that matter you can use a greatsword with one hand but that's going to tire you out.
Go to YouTube and look for this video One Handed Swords vs. Two handed Swords- Reaponse to Shad. And you might see why it kind bugs me.

But besides that it's pretty damn good mate.

What the hell is this?

Stark Lucifer? Nobody on that planet uses both family names.
Your use of classic names is uninspired and unoriginal as well.

Its bad that you cant be the least bit original with your names even a little.

Love the first chapter but I am sad he will not work on other things like cooking woodworking stonecrafting ECT instead of sleeping but oh well I look forward to the next chapter.

The plot has promise but the rest? Well, get a beta please. For your sake and the readers. Good Luck.