The story was really good. I hope at some point you decide to finish it.

I love this! Awesome writing and I'm glad I stuck all the way through! :D

I'm loving it :D

I like it a lot!

This has been a great read. I hope you update again.

I love this!

I love it! My advice, they have the happily every after we all want them to have start a new story with a new ship like maybe London and Roan. He is quickly becoming my other favorite character. I would be willing to help you out.

The simple fact that he went all the way to Arkcadia to ask for Abby's blessing is just..I don't know. I absolutely loved it! Looking forward to the next update.

Really looking forward to the next update!

Aww.. I wish he weren't so angry ..but still love that he went through so much just to ask for her blessing!

I AM SCREAMING OF JOY!

love it! But pick on someone else for change. I cant stand to see Belamy in pain. LOL

you write conflict very well. Any hints for my stories on how to do that?

I liked it, but there were some moments of confusion... what i do is for a thought... I Slant the whole thought. and then add (he thought).. or something like that.. after.. get discriptive, but not to the point of loosing the rythem

Your using "quotes" for their speech,.. were parts Bellamys mixed up thoughts? Confusing past with present? thats what i wasn't sure about.. what the guard was saying, and Bellamy was saying and what he was remembering.. .. But i'm liking the story. i love Bellamy pain and angst.. please keep going, the season 4 break is killing ne, and this gives me something to do..well done ! really like it ..

Noooooo, I'm dying. Poor Bellamy. Can't stay out of trouble!

Love this!