I really enjoyed this story. ️

I really enjoyed this story !

Thanks for sharing :)

Awe that was sweet!

Would absolutely love to see you turn this into a multi chapter and give us a chance to see their life together..Well done...

really like this story would love if it was longer

Very nicely done giving a young and grieving Seth time to grow into a man and Bella to find herself and heal from Edward's treatment of her.

i know you wrote this ages ago and im not usually one for this paring but I absolutely loves it! the writing was awesome and I loves the way you portrayed Seth, it truly was awesome :)
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Really enjoyed this one shot.

Love!

Magicall **

Great story... 5 yrs huh wow.

I wished there was more.

Loved this story. It was so well written. Keep it up. Have you thought about extending this story?

I'm glad to see that someone has finally written a seth and bella story we can always use more of those they're awesome. You're an awesome writer i look forward to more seth and bella story's from you maybe a long story that ends up being completed because so many authors don't complete their stories. I would suggest reading the clearwater solution and jailbait and theirs many other good stories but i can't remember them right now. Just check it out and think about writing a story because from what I've seen you make their pairing look awesome. Bye Bye Seth and Bella forever

Expanding my review a bit. I really liked their attitudes towards the imprint. I liked that they didn't screw around with others simply to abate loneliness or to experiment or what not. I liked the lack of drama and the overall tone of the story. They were really believable and in character.