Don't let the flame die out!

Why are you so good, I mean it's not fair, everything you write is great and unless it's a one-shot it rarely gets finished.

An interesting story. Sorry that it appears to be abandoned. Would love to read more.

Very interesting story so far... It's pretty well written and is running with a very unique concept in my opinion. So far, I'm not quite sure what I think of this story, but I'm certainly going to give it a shot.

Evil jaune! That's cool.
Poor Ruby and pyhrar. I know I spelt that wrong.
Don't forget silver.

Somehow I missed this, but I found it on Page 506 of the RWBY fanfic. Honest truth. I am going to read this now.

Damn I love your stories, this one is soooo interesting I really hope you come back to it one day

Poor Jaune I thought there was gonna be a chance that he’d somehow be fully him again but I’m guessing from ur author’s note this story is gonna have a sad ending or somethin. I’m still gonna read this tho if u update it

In a way I kinda like this story and it’s somewhat difference/uniqueness.

But I also feel bad for how Jaune is basically half a soulless monster. Or turning into a fully soulless monster. RIP Jaune I’d rather him go to heaven than go through with this. And he doesn’t even know if he should be scared about it. Sad life

Wow. I just read my comment and realized that I accidentally put both 'connection to' and 'reference' when I meant to delete 'connection to.' My bad.

I didn't really see the connection to Dexter reference until I read the 'dark passenger' part. I love it.

I love this story i love how indifferent u made jaune i hope you update this one sometime soon.

I really like this plot

Nice concept

Love the concept! Keep writing please d(_d)