Reviews for Reticent Monsters
Guest chapter 46 . 9/7
Please update Animal Instincts: At War With Monsters. I really want to read more of it and am also VEEEEEEEEERRRRYYYY curious as to why Fortune Cookie is a target... Please update!
EmpressRulerofallthatiswierd chapter 46 . 8/17
I really liked this chapter, it felt deferent from the rest. It had a calm, almost sentimental air to it mingled with the sad, regret, and lingering hope. The longing for what once was.
The Story's Shadow chapter 46 . 8/15
(Sorry for the late review.)

Understandable why MJ feels the way she feels. She's tied into the symbiote matters, obviously, and she feels responsible for what happened even though she isn't.

Peter is someone dear to her and what's been happening would eat at her, the symbiote feels this yet doesn't understand it. It may eventually, it depends on how it connects to MJ mentally rather than physically.

By the end, it seems it's the start of a more (and I don't mean this as a pun) symbiotic relationship.
CyberSleuthCat chapter 46 . 8/13
I'd definitely be interested in joining the server and think it's cool idea
TitaniumNindroid chapter 46 . 8/12
Yes, new chapter! And one about MJ and her symbiote? Even better!
I’m wondering, if MJ and Peter met in their current situation, would Pete’s symbiotes find MJ unthreatening because of her being bonded too?
Oooh I’m so excited! XD
TitaniumNindroid chapter 45 . 7/23
*chokes on tears*

This was not at all what I was expecting when I clicked on this fic, but I’m so glad that I did. It’s incredible. It makes you want to go around screaming at the top of your lungs because Peter is still out there! The team may be doing a lot to find him, but surely if Ben could accidentally bump into him on the street then they are bound to find him eventually!
But that also raises other questions and concerns. If they do get Pete back, he’s not going to be the same. Will he completely avoid any white hallways or even White Tiger?
And has Harry already thrown the party? What if Peter hears about it and convinces the symbiotes that they can get food there?! I can just imagine him turning up in his whinope, not saying it) shorts, red shirt and black hoodie, sneaking into the party and eating all he can. Then Harry spots him and starts internally screaming when he sees him and-
Wait, I’m getting off track...
What was I saying?
Oh, right.
I totally freaked out when Spidey snapped on the operation table, I hate to admit it that Peter has a point, he has been relying a little to heavily on his teammates, and I loath that I agree with such poisonous thoughts.
I’m happy that Ben and Flash have made up, and that Fury has returned (go to sleep Connors!) and also that Adrien is safe. That’s a bit of good news I guess!
Keep up the incredible writing!
Matt chapter 45 . 7/8
How about you update your other stories soon like Animal Instincts 2 and the many more you haven’t finished.
EmpressRulerofallthatiswierd chapter 44 . 7/2
I vote nay
ArtThemisLeijon chapter 44 . 6/28
Saben cual es el elemento que arruina cualquier trama de acción? El romance.
Y si, se que esto no es exactamente del genero "acción" PERO! Esta regla se le puede aplicar a, bueno, cualquier historia que no este centrado en eso.
Así que, es preferible seguir con el ritmo que se ha estado desarrollando a lo largo de la historia.
Y creo que, para este punto, es mejor dejarlo como una amistad que, en el futuro, apoyara incondicionalmente a Peter ya sea en su recuperación o lo que tengas planeado.
SidTheKid526 chapter 45 . 6/25
Hey, so glad you updated here and I'm really liking the direction you're taking with your story. You said that the majority vote was to keep the fic as is in terms of relationships. Do you plan on adding more to it in terms of relationships? Like I know you're not editing it in right now, but will you be adding to it in the future and start developing it now? It would be fun to see how everyone interprets everything or how they deal with stress. Especially the Avengers and maybe even some of the X-Men as they got close to Spidey. Once again, an amazing job as always and keep up the great work!
The Story's Shadow chapter 45 . 6/25
(Sorry for the late review.)

*Sighs* This is another really sad thing about Peter's situation.

The symbiotes have been keeping him alive and one of the backsides to that is they see almost everything as a threat to him and them. Despite being melded with him, they're in such a messy state that their pain and anger is targeted at those wanting to help Peter...well...maybe not they symbiotes though...but still.

But what Peter could see in the fight, that's leaving traumatized already. The symbiotes attacked what they saw as a threat and did so to take it down as to no longer be a threat. Is it good? No. They are having a hard time trying to understand what Peter wants. But Peter's in such a vulnerable and weak state, they're basically his only form of defense/strength. Granted he held them back some, but if it hadn't been for them...they might still be in the Hydra facility.

And they're just becoming possessive of him more and more now...so only time will tell how this goes.
Death Fury chapter 45 . 6/25
excellent chapter
Northern Goshawk chapter 45 . 6/25
"You are home," huh? Wonder what THAT means.

I guess for me, it's easy to forget that Peter is STILL the one under all those symbiotes, seeing as how eager the symbiotes were in attacking Peter's teammates, and I didn't really see much in how Peter saw the fight. But this little section helped to shed light on that. *Round of applause*

Nicely done! Can't wait for more!
repliedgrunt14 chapter 45 . 6/25
I think this story is GOLDEN
Hunter chapter 44 . 6/10
Hey! I honestly love this story and the way you are going about it. Honestly, if you are going to do a ship I think it makes sense to do it with White Tiger. Considering the fact that her suit is white, it might be a way for Spidey to get over his fear of the colour. Parksborn is a great ship, but after rereading the story I think sticking as best friends is the most understandable path. I also really like seeing TigerXSpidey fics because the story was so built up but nothing happened between them.

Also, I was wondering if you are going to continue to write this story on or if you are just going to be updating on Wattpad?

Thanks for writing such an amazing story and I hope you continue it!
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