Reviews for Dissonance |
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LPWomer chapter 3 . 10/26/2017 This is what I need in my life!~ |
Serelena chapter 3 . 10/18/2016 OMG this is by far one of the BEST OC stories on this site! I love the idea that your OC is a prodigy due to a mix of her previous life and her physiological predisposition of this life. It is refreshing to see because I cannot imagine Naruto's sister as anyone other than a prodigy taking more after Minato in personality than Kushina. It helps balance out Naruto's personality and strengths. I am so happy I found your story and cannot wait to find out what happens next! |
Ea chapter 3 . 10/4/2016 I effing love this, it's really just that amazing |
Ea chapter 2 . 10/4/2016 I seriously love your writing |
Ekatma chapter 3 . 9/25/2016 I enjoyed your fic. You did some great world building and the SI's manipulative strake is interesting. I would love some explanation about her oddness |
Ekatma chapter 3 . 9/24/2016 Good job. I like the SI and how she's unrepentant of her manipulations. I do want to know how she managed to learn and entire language like that but I guess that's a reveal. I really like the world building that you've done |
Sss chapter 3 . 9/5/2016 SHES AWFUL and I'm in love with her Nice chapters! |
A Deathless Song chapter 3 . 8/23/2016 This is just awesome. Rin is an amazing (and amusing) character, and her relationship with Naruto is too adorable for words. Looking forward to reading more. n_n |
Kurogami Mika chapter 1 . 8/14/2016 Emotional blackmail done by a twenty something in a child's body. Poor poor Kakashi. Loved the story. |
soapsopas chapter 3 . 8/7/2016 "At the foot of the door to our apartment, I found a small stack of books wrapped in twine. On the very top was a handwritten journal, entitled: Whirlpool Sealing Arts, by Uzumaki Kushina." Kakashi's been more/less guiltripped! I find it cute that he left it there and pity because Rin messed around. Poor guy. Lol. That's too much for his shattered soul XD. Anyways, great chapterr! |
animemangaobsessed chapter 3 . 8/2/2016 lol she's horrible |
Adatum chapter 3 . 8/2/2016 She really is and ass, isn't she (but it was an awesomely asshole thing to do). Well, at least it worked ... somewhat. One thing - you spell Kakashi's last name wrong. It's HaTaKe, not HaKaTe. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Kelmoria chapter 3 . 8/2/2016 I read the thing and I like this character already. I look forward to reading the next chapter and reading more on what Rin will do. |
Abydmal chapter 3 . 8/2/2016 Good. For a moment there I thought Kakashi would snap and pull off a Sakumo. That'd been pretty awkward for the story. |
seven007 chapter 3 . 8/2/2016 omg this is sooo adorable aww .i love update fast writer-san |