A very different take. Loved this.
an update would be really nice.
I read it ages ago and came back to see any further development.

So, instead of a true antagonist relationship it looks like Draco and Harry will act more like friendly rivalry. Ron was a bit OC, but it was a meeting dominated by older persons.

There was money and other things taken from Harry's vault(s)...so what else is missing. If you go by canon, we know the family cloak at the least?

Great story so far, please continue.

this very good

Kaito is hungry wants to eat

I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter keep up the good work man!

Love the story just want to point out that the time skip date reads 1981 and then you have September 1 1980.

Lovely chapter, can't wait to read more.

the time skip should be to 1991 not 1981also I'd reccomend a beta. i feel lately i read a lot of stories that have good ideas but seriously need a beta, I'd love to read more of this in a more polished form. maybe i should offer to beta, my english skills are good enough, though i normally dont care much when writing comments lol...

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awesome

Very good chapter. This looks like it will turn out to be a very good story. I know how you like taking down Dumbledor with your stories as it happened in the other story you wrote. He should be taken down at some point but not at the start. Harry should still become friends with Ron and be against Draco. Having his cousin at Hogwarts should make for an interesting story line as well. Taking down the Dursley is always a good thing as they are so nasty and deserve what is coming to them.

this is a very good story. look forward to the next chapter.

awesome

awesome