I was enjoying this story when I ran out of story...I surely hope you will update soon

Face channeled Starbuck with the "Frak" curse...

Face should have told Murdock that they really needed a plane that didn't have any mechanical difficulties before he dropped him off at the bus station

Oh, you've just made we want to watch this episode again! I loved that you tied this in with Father Magill. Was he the original client? I can't remember now. Anyway, very clever!

I also liked your explanation of how Murdock acquired the plane and why Face didn't blow up the bridge. And as always, the Murdock/Face interaction is always a pleasure to read. Nice bit of humour too. I have never watch BSG, so thanks for the "frak" explanation.

Nice!

Totally loving it! You nailed Face beautifully. And the "frak" was Avery nice touch!

Your Frak made me laugh!

Nice BSG addition. ;)
I'm loving this story!

Oh poor Facey is so stressed out. Thank God Murdock has this great idea about the contruction site. It definitely isn't Face's day, is it. Bumping into Lynch of all people. I can actually picture him driving like you described. So glad they managed to escape, but no TNT. So that's why he couldn't blow up the bridge. Poor thing !
LOL Just loved the 'frak' coming out of Facey's mouth :))

Oh oh. Now it's up to Murdock! I just knew he had a crazy idea :) But he pulled it off. He scammed the plane with fuel in it. But maybe he should have paid some attention to the compass or that odd whine the engines made ... Guess he was a bit too proud of himself ;)
Love the story so much !

Yeah ... Father Peck ;) Who could resist him ? I know I wouldn't :)
He is so very good at scamming stuff. Especially loved this one. Nicely done :)

So Murdock is gonna help out Face with his 'list'. This is going to be so much fun :)

Face and his bond with Father Maghill. I so like that :) Nice approach to the actual story.

Ok, I'm hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter! Btw, I love that your son inspired this. 2nd Gen A Team fan?

Hihi!

I love mission-fics!