I just wanted to say that this story is (by far) one of the bests I have read for this series! I’m excited to see how the trap may turn out, if it goes terrible bad or ends right then. It would be interesting to see if there was a sequel to it after, like him escaping his punishment, or if it becomes a novel. Your story truly is one of the best, and I hope that you continue with it, it makes me happy to read it. I mean I’m sad for Natsume for going through this, but it’s a very good story which makes me happy!

so... what happen next?

This is beautiful! Please continue!

Hey, this was really cool. Are you going to finish it? Anyway, thanks, I really likes the storyline and how you wrote the characters. :)

Étrangement, je ne l'avais pas lu finalement... et c'est vraiment étonnent parce que j'ai lu toute les fics de Natsume avec Takashi et Siji... comment à-t-elle bien pu passer à travers mes filets, je me demande?
En tout cas, c'est une belle découverte :) Je trouve que ta caractérisation des personnages est plutôt bonne et l'intrigue est intéressante... Je ne peux rien dire au niveau de l'orthographe et la grammaire par contre X) déjà qu'en français ce n'est pas mon truc, alors ne parlons pas de l'anglais!
j'ai bien envie de savoir la suite, je t'avoue, je me doute que Natsume va se retrouver dans une situation catastrophique (parce que premièrement c'est Natsume, et deuxièmement on reverrai alors l'entité du prologue) mais comment Natori et Matoba auraient pu laisser ça arriver? Dans tout les cas, merci pour cette fanfic :)

Please, updateI love the manga and i like your story also. It's very intresting.
Thanks

Hi!
I really like the plot of your fic. It's a little difficult to find Natsume Yuujinchou fics that I like, mainly because I think it's hard to write them in the same melancholic and warm way that Midorikawa-san does. Even tough Matoba is a little OOC, it's understandable why.
I hope to see more of your work!

I'm really excited to read more of this, you had me hooked at the fourth chapter.

Fuck that sounds awfully terrifying
Keep on the writes

I could so imagine the horse and hinoe(?) I think that's her name getting ticked for being left out once more lol

hi, I really love this story and i hope you update soon :D

Hi! This is my first review. Do you mind if I correct a typo from one of your sentences? It's this one "Being who he was, the two still wondered about weither or not..." it should be whether instead of weither c: I hope this helps.

Ok this is getting quite interesting. I don't find a story to often that keeps me puzzling over clues given since I can usually piece them out. Coodos for you on that one. not many people can wright something that keeps things hidden from my minds twisted logic. You've done an amazing job so far keeping everyone in characters. I often times find myself slipping sometimes trying to keep character for my fanfictions and I found that watching an episode or three (or 20) tends to help me balance that back out and get a good feel for them. Like if I was doing a natsume fanfic I'd focus on the episodes where my specific characters first met and one other episode that screams my name. LIke for this one id be their individual meeting with natsume and episode I think four of the latest series.
Hope to see an update soon and am truly enjoying the story so far. Good luck and may the gods of writing forever be in your favor.

I need more chapters! This is so good!

Genius!~~~~