Honestly, this would be an excellent start to a Snape Mentors Harry story. Not even Severus could ignore the fact that Harry at least attempted to do something in regards to stemming the flow of blood from his injured leg.

This is extremely well written; the characters, emotions, and actions all flow well, and the incorporation of bits and pieces of the original source material honestly makes it almost like something Rowling herself would have done.

I am looking forward to seeing what comes next ! This story is addicting ! Absolutely love all of your stories !

What a dynamic conclusion to the trial! Excellent storyline!

OMG that was an ominous ending!

Absolutely brilliant 2nd task!

I absolutely love your writing style ! I am looking forward to seeing any updates or new stories you come up with! Brilliant flow and exceptionally well written!

I totally understand the sympathy for Neville and his parents, but at least his parents are still living and he can at least talk to them and know them. Harry never got that chance and never will because his were killed before he really got to know them all he has is what others tell him or memories from others of his parents. I personally think Harry has it far worse off in that case, Neville's parents while not all there still are alive and he can speak to them. Heck until he was about 11 years old Harry didn't hardly know anything about his parents except the lies the Dursleys told him.

Hoping for additional updates. Your work is interesting. If White Squirrel likes you, that is a considerable recommendation in itself.

Brilliant story! The plot is gripping, different enough from canon to keep us guessing, and the characters are well written. I like the relationship between Harry and Ginny, and the father/son bond developing between Sirius and Harry. Well done!

Thanks for your work, it's awesome. I'm feeling bad that i didn't read this story 4 months earlier to participate in your vote-maybe my voice could change your decision about story which you wish focus in first place. I hope you will continue writing this story one day. Be happy _

And yet another stupid trope. Semi-solid? Really? At least it wasnt twenty fuckin feet tall.

It's great read but are you using these for dialogue quotations 'Who is this man?' instead of "Who is this man?" It makes a huge difference in reading it.

Are you purposely portraying harry as Autistic

I loved this chapter so much! Please update soon! And please don't kill Sirius in the next book. Love this!

I kind of suspected this. the story would have to go on somehow, and unless umbridge and fudge had something to do with it, it had to have happened.